You didn’t strike me as a jealousy type. But I like surprises! “)

Powerfully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! Great spill my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

“Baby, you drank so much of me
I am seeping out of your pores”

What an amazing couplet this is. Wow. Every single line of this piece stands alone as so significant.

Great write. Jealousy can be a two way street. When two people are in love and there both the jealous type, that can be quite toxic.

damn good write

Superb writing.

Subtle. YES. Erotic. YES. Have something to do with a dormouse. Maybe. 😉

Oh, this is exactly how I take a bath at the end of every day!
And then the children rush in, dumping mice in the tub!
If it were not for your pic, I would have had a completely different take on this rodent epic – but you do have a way of putting a twist in every rat’s tale

Lost in your fingers. Erotic is the word. Very good

Soft-porn erotica at it’s finest. Nice work here.

Beautifully penned, Thomas. Into the book it belongs! Nicely done my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Thank you.

Thank you. The dormouse is a symbol for something else. lol

lol