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Read MoreP=Romeo, what makes you so sad? R=My emotions are my own why do you ask? P=I hoped life was treating you kinder than it did before R=Before when? When my love walked out the door. P=Why not open your heart for someone new....
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Thank you Cuz:))
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nice, I like this… you should develop this into a Series (play)
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Thank you Sam. Really a play? Maybe lol
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I love this, Fia. Dito, Sam.
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Thank you Kay-1
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I like new concept poetry & love the fact it is possible to listen to the words although I note this is not your voice Fia .. still it kind of fits with my idea of Romeo’s voice ..
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Thank you Neville. I was sitting here thinking of how he would sound and feel if things were different. I may try my hand at writing a play, but I want his voice to stay true to the original. It’s a thought.
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All is lost for poor Romeo and he’s doomed to a lonely darkness, then… the clouds break, the sun shines again, and all is well. I love happy endings. Hopefully, it will last.
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It’s bright and sunny for Romeo because Juliet’s back huh? lol Thank you Sam;)
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Read MoreSkin slick with sweat, Firm thighs wrapped around my hips, Your nails etch red lines onto my back. As my groin thrusts into your spread lips. I hold your wrists above your head. As you whisper your 'wants' into my ears.. ...
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What’ll you do, indeed?! Hot Rhyme, Mister! xx
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Thanks!
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Read MoreI killed a rat not happy about that,but what other choice did I have?It wouldn't just leave of its own accord.It had found a nice cosy place in my home,a place to set up house and breed.I'm sorry your life...
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It does feel awful to kill a living animal but they are dangerous and they steal food. I hope your okay.
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Thanks Fia for reading.
I really just wanted it to leave but rats arent inclined to do that.Im ok with it now but I still wasn’t thrilled about killing it.
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To find love but the old face is stuck in stasis of despair and anger. Nice one
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Appreciate the comments. Thank you!
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Summarize me again, please, my friend!
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Thanks PAR
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If Hatred was a person it will hate this Haiku poem.
Well written bro! “)-
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Thank you M.E!
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The promising and positive title” sunny days ” creates an interesting contrast to the harsh and brutally realistic content of the poem. Very well written, dear Keith! xox
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Thank you Elke. Hope all is well. xoxx
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreWhen you say you want meWell baby there are things we must get straightDepending on how you want to goI’m not an ordinary dish on a plate There are flavors to exploreAvenues you must ventureThere are deep, deep wells in...
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Thank you . Petter;)
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Oh.. maybe I am submissive to him. (giggling) Thank you Crimsin
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Passionately penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian;))
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Now that’s a woman who knows her worth and isn’t afraid to state it and stand by it. There’s nothing weak about it, fierce is what this declaration is. But cleverly worded and leaving just enough to the imagination that he still has plenty of work to do.
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Yes you are right. The mind is an aphrodisiac let it go its own path. Thank you Willow;))
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write as always my friend. Dig the Shakespeare vibe, also I’ve always thought you’re amazing at writing dialogue. Nicely done. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian