Pills are dangerous. This piece was written with power & a great performance here. Well done!

How seductive the call of pharmaceuticals. Health, happiness, sanity.. all disintegrated by one seemingly harmless cure.
Excellent write, my friend!

I am sure he would be impressed by your ability to adapt to his style, which is not easy. This has a good flow and rapid pace

He does have a machine gun style, doesn’t he? Quick bites! It doesn’t seem to matter what style you’re using, you always manage to bring it home on point, my friend

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. He saw it on DU, I think he approved, if I remember right. Appreciate you.

Damian

I like this style. Reminds me of a poet I knew. I think his name was JustDave. He had a bit of this style as well. Great ink.

Powerfully penned, Keith. Appreciate you.

Damian

The terrifying thing about these almost disturbing pieces is that they read with such (pardon the pun) deadly accuracy & far too much semblance of reality to them. Damn

I sometimes think people try to hide that there are really bad upbringings. My father wasn’t abusive but I did have a rough childhood. I seen plenty of families that were basically this.

Yeah, that mother fucker deserved it. Great ink.

Thanks Adira. About publishing, maybe one day.

This one is so bloody good…

Unfortunately, this really does go down, Keith. But you really described the reality of this pseudo relationship. so to speak. Brilliantly penned, my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

I’ve seen too many relationships like this. I think people can be rather self destructive. Abuse can also mess with our heads. We tend to believe that we are only as good as what our abusers tells us. It’s difficult to get away from that but most people live better lives once they do. Great ink.