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Fia Naturie
3 weeks, 1 day ago

Man, that vault holds gems. Great piece.
Favorite line
“He calls my bluff about fearing death

With insults meant as a means to kill me slow”
- Damian DeadLove
  3 weeks, 1 day ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I love those lines as well, the vault has many layers indeed, but some are also incomplete or rough drafts, or will never see the light of day. lol. Appreciate you, cuz.
  
  Damian
Willow
3 weeks, 1 day ago

This smacks so hard of facing down the demons. It’s funny how bluffing can actually lead to the footing we need. There’s no retreat in this one. Just solid, bite me attitude…even as a bluff it carries the sting. The mistakes we make are lessons for farther down the road. It’s best not to forget their making, but their purpose is actually healing. If we let it. Powerful piece, my friend
- Damian DeadLove
  3 weeks, 1 day ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. The familiar sting always lingers beneath the surface, it’s a reminder to not forget the past but learn from it. Your analysis is spot on as usual, it must be the kindred spirt effect. I got the memo, I brought the hot chocolate to go with marshmallows, the bonfire awaits us. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Damian DeadLove
3 weeks, 1 day ago

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well it’s nice to see you back brother, you’ve been missed around here. Always grateful for your continued support it means a lot to me. Appreciate you.

Damian
Neville
2 weeks, 6 days ago

Sometimes its best to face em square on isn’t it .. but then I guess that’s where these fine words are coming from .. well there, and that seemingly bottomless vault you guard well and keep drawing from .. Write on brother D .. Neville 😎👍
- Damian DeadLove
  2 weeks, 6 days ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Sometimes there isn’t a choice once you reach a certain point, but yes experience is often painful in its teachings. Plus eventually one gets tired of running eventually. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Brandon Houser
2 weeks, 6 days ago

Excellent write up. That last line sets the reader up perfectly to loop back to the beginning and read this again. The cycle to start this over again gels perfectly with the cycle of the struggle you writ about. Deep stuff and worth every read one gives it.
- Damian DeadLove
  2 weeks, 6 days ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brandon. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Some of that looping cycle comes from many summers of songwriting. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
NAAJIR
2 weeks, 6 days ago

Next level shadow work, bro
This vibe resonates with me on a level unspoken
Into the poetic crypt it goes

Much respect

Naaj
- Damian DeadLove
  2 weeks, 6 days ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Naaj. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Means a lot to me coming from a talented writer like yourself my brother. Much respect.. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Curly Grace
2 weeks, 5 days ago

The worn path, the rising heat, the serpent’s bite. It all feels like the shape of an old struggle finally seen in full light.
- Damian DeadLove
  2 weeks, 5 days ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, CG. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Your commentary is so spot on, thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Tim
2 weeks, 5 days ago

We’ve all been bit by something in our past. Volunteering to carry the venom through life is never a good idea. Good one, Damian.
- Damian DeadLove
  2 weeks, 5 days ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. A very true statement indeed. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

Fia Naturie
3 weeks, 2 days ago

This is a beautiful tribute, cipher
Cipher
3 weeks ago

Thank you Fia…
Honoria
3 weeks ago

Dear C,

Your poem is beautiful and I’m hesitant to have you confirm this, did Josh pass? H🌷
- Cipher
  2 weeks, 1 day ago
  
  Nice to see you H…
  
  <#3

Tim
1 week, 6 days ago

With age often comes wisdom and more appreciation for our past than may have originally been felt. I think the lesson in this was the appreciation for the women in his past life, his mother being the leader of them all, and the little lessons learned along the way.
- goldenmyst
  1 week, 6 days ago
  
  Your perspective here is right on target here my friend. As the writer I can truly say you have focused on the heart of this story and gleaned the meanings within. I am so deeply grateful to you for sharing your understanding and what you took from my words. Yes the mother is the leader of these women in his life. I think I read something a psychologist wrote along those lines long ago. You really understood exactly this theme and delved into this meaning most aptly. I thank you so much. 🙂
  
  John
  - Tim
    1 week, 6 days ago
    
    No problem, John. Sorry it took so long. Been busy. 🙂
    - goldenmyst
      1 week, 6 days ago
      
      My friend no problem about waiting. Never a problem. Very much appreciate you and your words here. 🙂
      
      John

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