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    Gothic Rose: Part Five

    Our emotions stir       from our quivering shadows            in the glow of the candlelight.                 Rhythmically,   our black hearts mingle       in our beats,           playing music    ...

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    • hello Daniele this is written beautifully I love it 💕

      • Thanks as always, I’m not sure whether to continue it? My character would definitely become scarier… haha.

        Daniel

    • Beautifully penned, Daniel. The cadence has a very catchy rhythm and flow. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Shivering, lovely, creepy shivers down your spine… now that tells me I achieved what I set out to make here… thank you!

      In fact, your comment inspired me to continue this little gothic-romance thread, haha. Part six coming today!

      Daniel

    • Hauntingly romantic with creepy tenderness, Daniel. To be honest, I need something to spark creativity in me and this made me pose thought to a genre I’ve yet to really spill ink in. I look forward to reading more in your series.

      • Thank you, Pandy. My genre is Gothic-Surrealism. Though I didn’t invent the term, I’ve used it in a literary sense instead of art. Thanks, again and find that spark!

        Daniel
        Gothic-Surrealist

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    Gothic Rose: Part Four

    I spread your petals,    our candlelight flickers         and your heartbeat ticks,              enticed with our aromas. Hard as stone and wanting,     slithering inside you without pause,         ...

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    I Want to Be A Star

    Hi, not sure what I'm doing up here  but I think I can say a few words in front of all these stars  because when I look out into the audience  all I see is stars    You’re a star you're a star and damn...

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    Gothic Rose: Part Three

    My crimson tongue      runs up your petal           tasting and licking                the dew off you.Your wet tongue      slithers into my mouth       ...

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    • I love the cascading staircase set up. Well, well I like the belt being pulled off to be wrapped around your throat. Hmm delightful.

    • Beautifully penned, Daniel. A very intense write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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