ops sorry I already crossed the lake… you have to swim… as I said your poetry is always amazing

this is abosutely gorgeous lovely Fia this moved me greatly ❤️

Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with some deep layers my friend. This gives me musing vibes.. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Oh wow…this one took me to a memory place. Amazing, Fia

I enjoyed this,Fia.

Well..you talk about me musing. Damian this makes you think and think hard. Favorite line
“Freedom’s a fading illusion masked as a tomb”

You have nailed a hard and important topic with this one, Damian. The majority suffers at the hands and decisions of the few, and in my cynicism, I feel it will always be that way. We must not allow them to distract us overly much (conveniences, sports, politics, religion) or the sooner our end will be upon us. In my mind the song: In The Year 2525, is ever more relevant. Exemplary piece, my friend!

Keep writing the good stuff
Clay

this is very powerful it’s true what you say I love this because you brought it to light what everyone knows but don’t talk about ❤️

The elite consolidate wealth and power beyond comprehension as the “dream” becomes irrelevant to reality. Perhaps we are becoming a new society of enslavement, as technology is the guise to pacify. Damian, your words are well thought out and expressed.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Peter. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Indeed. After all there is no honor amongst thieves. Appreciate you.

Damian

These things are so much on my mind these days. My daughter tells me we can’t move or breathe without them knowing but we can’t stop. If we give up, they win and that’s what they’re counting on. So we keep picking at the cracks in their armor and building our community. They’ll destroy themselves eventually. I’d like to see them go down sooner than later. Another fantastically pointed piece, my friend

We’re living in a digitized world where we’re being watched at all times for the benefit of others. I can relate. Nice one, Damian. 🙂

A frightening rendition of the truth.
Regards
James

I fear an increasing number of us are having our eyes opened for us big time .. its a crazy world out here isn’t it just .. Great ink Damian .. Neville

We are controled whether we are aware of it or not, the technology, economy, fear, etc etc… What’s that AI but soon to replace human! unfortunately a Crazy crazy world! But what I believe that after the complete mess comes harmony, after violence comes peace, after injustice comes the justice. You always carry the world on your shoulders Damian my friend, do take care of You and remember that You are not alone🤍

This really pulls at the heart strings. graveyard of good meals… good line

A sharp expression.
Regards
James

Most excellent, Fia.

Passionately penned, Fia. Another excellent write with a spicy vibe my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, cuz.

Damian

Chère F.,
Is it my imagination or are you writing better and better every time?

My favorite piece:
I will not say

What you need to hear

I will only come closer

Look into my eyes

See what takes hold

A proof of your calm self worth I think.

Simply wonderful!
Warm regards, Gus

“Fall into me

Or lose

Your moment”
Thats a no brainer, Fia. A wonderful write. “)

Sultry, subtle, and provocative within the same moment. There is a gently palpable and urgent touch present in each line that is welcome and enveloping. Absolutely fantastic write, Fia!

Clay