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Read MoreWorld – Peels away, layer by layer Just so we can know, that – Which is there. Never-ever despair, even as you enter the diffusion - in the confrontation of the illusion of: The tether. Where it is deeper and darker and seems like...
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Deep and introspective. Diggin this!!!
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Read Morehttps://www.youtube.com/shorts/1AXfOoo-1j4 Poets read the runes of raindrops Place of flow state space where time stops Each work of each, a renaissance Reaching for the out of reach: Essence-ever present in every birth & Rebirth. Born into this storm To be born and reborn Placing incision into perception So as...
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hello dearest Daniel I feel you on this one great write 💕
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Brenda, my writing is getting more sorrowful, I feel. Darker, not depressingly, but hauntingly beautiful. You know me by now, I ramble in comments, haha. Nearly four months off my medication now. My writing has evolved somehow recently, I can’t explain it. Thanks Brenda.
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Sometimes we express ourselves with a cloak of darkness, but there’s usually a deep feeling heart behind it.
Thank you for sharing a small part of your world.🌹
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Powerfully penned, Daniel. Your writes have layers and depth my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Hj xoxo
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hello beautiful Fia this is so passionate and painful I only hope it is fiction love can be cruel 💕
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Thank you, crimsin. Yes it is fiction. I am glad you felt something from this. xoxo
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Simply amazing write my friend, you changed it up a little on this one. Excellent! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. I always want to try something new. Always appreciate your comments.
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Awww, Fia =(
How poignantly vivid your pen has laid its sorrows’ disappointments upon our hearts … so many times we’ve gone through such relatably plaintive ache, yet, your poetic emotion expresses it all so vividly, as though it could be any one of us experiencing your own moments of disquiet.
“Love is a demon’s creation.
It obscures and twists the mind,
That being in complete submergence is good.”Oh, yes! Nothing’s like LOVE it when it’s good, when all is wine and roses; for, love shall seek not but for its own satisfaction. It will bend and twist you, and shine and dim upon you, while holding onto those within its grip. And, there is no single answer to the question of what love really is, but I have learned that when love is in control, there are no guarantees.
I so admire the smoothness and imagery with which you paint emotions, feeling, and thoughts upon the canvas our minds, hearts, and souls … the hallmarks of a true artist’s touch.
Swearing we’ll never fall in-love again, our needs are far too deep not to.
Beautiful work, Dear Poetess … thank you for sharing! ⁓ Richard🖌Superb artwork choice:
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“Excellent use of metaphor, too.”
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Read MoreShe danced alone in the streets.Oblivious to 'their' stares.'They' said she was mad.But 'they' just couldn't hear the music.
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this is beautiful dearest Benny 💕
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Thank you for reading.
Find the song by Sting called They Dance Alone.
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Even if they could hear it, some of them would still say it. Imaginations in full stagnation. This is lovely. Really builds the visual beautifully
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Thanks and I’m glad you enjoyed. 🙏
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I am madly enthralled and peaked by this loveliness. The depth is Everything. Umph.
Gentle man, thank you for whispering this one upon us❤️
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Sometimes, if I’m lucky,the words come out and please others.
I’m glad you enjoyed my words.😘
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This is interesting. I like the “being in between.”