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    I.C.U

    Both eyes closed is fraught with dangerspeace can be defiled by strangers.So, I sleep with one eye openhoping to know what's realand what's not.

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    • hello dearest Benny my heart sank at first I thought you were in the icu of the hospital… I’m glad you are alright and keeping your eyes open for treachery 💕

    • Good luck with that! LOL.
      Cool little ditty, btw.

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    How to Work on StarsRite Information

    How to maneuver on the siteTo upload your WorkClick on Write and Publish1 = You will see series, add series chapter number and edit seriesThis is for your stories that have more than one chapter and want to stay...

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    Four Shot Glasses and a Choice

    I would be telling you a lie if I stated that I did not need a night out with my friends. Work is the usual hectic mess that it is. The peace and serenity I crave at home have...

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    Typical Saturday Night

    Bloodshot skies acting like a backdrop  Trees sway amongst a whispering wind Redemption glows within the moonlight While destruction lies around the bend   Seductive rivers carry manipulated beasts Who bring war to those considered different Hatred fuels these sinful calloused hearts By using influence to seduce...

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    • I guess we all have our interpretations. I see a line of young people heading into a club or hanging out outside it to hear hip hop or rap. Many may disagree, but I see that kind of music as negative and detrimental. Just my two cents.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. To me every kind of music or creative outlet has its negative sides, as well as its positives. Nothing in this world is exempt from good and evil. That’s just my two cents, for what they’re worth. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Tremendous flow here, my friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • hello dearest Damian either they don’t read the situations or they are goading up to reveal what we know… through manipulation of a situation…they get me all the time this is one of your best in my opinion 💕

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I couldn’t agree with you more, the truth will hopefully be revealed. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I loved those lines as well, you’re right there is no such thing as a safe place in the world’s current state. Happy to read your commentary again, hope your music projects are going well. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • “While destruction lies around the bend”

      It’s interesting how the word lies changes the entire tone when read as one definition over the other. This is such a cleverly written piece. And powerful, as you excel at, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Loved that line as well. It is interesting how it changes the tone, I love the little things like that about writing, seems you do too. Nice to know I got company! Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Fanfuckingtastic Damian. Powerful and packs a tremendous punch!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I do what I can. lol. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • I kinda get an image of friends drifting apart maybe due to political differences.

      Great ink, friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Nick. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I can see that, and that’s why I love poetry, every interpretation is open to the reader. Appreciate you.

        Damian

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    Lady of Sorrow (Ch.3, Raven)

    Days later. I had written so little between Raven’s suicide and the days following. During the daytime, I would sit quietly in front of my laptop staring at a blank screen. Then I would naturally become frustrated and restless,...

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