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Read MoreForgive and forget Easy to say if you haven't been violated in some way.Forgiving is easier than forgetting, even though our memories of dreadful events are never 100% accurate, which is a good thing indeed. If we dont speak of...
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Thanks Fia.
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Read MoreCandles within your eyes, illuming my shadow. Lonely in the dim I was, there is now a glow to follow.
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This short and I can’t help to say aww. This is sweet
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You know what I like about you, Daniel? You write and pour your heart out and couldn’t care less what others think or if you even get a nod or comment. You’re incredibly talented. Never stop being you.
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It’s how I’ve been living… pretty much in the shadow for a long time now. I refuse to analyze too many of other poet’s work and I don’t like there being too much rigid structure on writing. I write how I feel and in a fluid, bending structure that allows me to complete whatever piece I want the way I want it delivered to the world.
Thank you as always Alexandria,
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🕊️🌾🕊️
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Esoteric and beautiful. The image you painted here was filled with passion and beauty. Enjoyed this much.
John
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Read MoreA blanket of dust obscures our picture. Soft earth once your skin, now dusted with snow. This sheet had layered over months without warmth. However, we are soon to hold each other again. Then spring will dawn upon the rains of April and shower...
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Memories of spring. Nice Daniel
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Read MoreTurn out the lightsLet the darkness spread Pull your arms around meNuzzle my eager head Against the thick sweatshirtYou wear to bedI reach behind youEmbrace the small of your backMy caress begins quickly My heart racing so fast Can’t wait to inhaleThe skin between...
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Nice Friday night there, RPM
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Thanks, Fia. You gotta live Friday nights like this!
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RPM this is a softly nocturne so lovely to behold. Love the build up as the vision of intimacy unfolds and I am drawn to read it all. Riveted by the sensual beauty you created here.
John
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So glad you found beauty in something I wrote. I am honored.
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Read MorePressing my chest against your backI lean to smell your lovely neckYour fragrant lotion entices meIt moistens your skin, so intoxicating!I’m so ready to be inside of you!You’re less certain, I must wait for youSo I reach for your...
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Very, tender moment described so nicely.
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Thanks, Fia. And thanks for leading the way on providing comments on this site!
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You are welcome;))
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Love how the foreplay unfolds here so tenderly and not rushed. You write the scene with exquisite detail of sensual feelings and sensation. I could see it all so perfectly.
John
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So glad you could envision it John. Grateful for your comment!
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This whole thing speaks the truth. That last stanza is spot on Peter.;))