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Read MoreJuli 30, 1788 Cher D. The coils of rope had a certain snugness along with their bite. All I could do was sit and watch you wrap me up in it, tighter and tighter. Stopping only...
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Read MoreIt is I again. I guess I should have explained something about myself, I don’t know if I ever addressed this, I hate fucking politics. I write about them sure, but I don’t love anything about the...
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The two line summary actually hooked me into reading this Damian. Your command of words and imagery shows you are a masterful writer. Bravo! I’m going to have to read the rest of the chapters!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Daniel. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. Yeah, the summary is lyrics from a song I penned. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian this went to the bone! Thank you for sharing this. Let the ink pour.
Bat
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Bat. So glad you connected with the story, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Damian this is strong tonic and a grand read. Love how you wrote this with such great clarity like a beat writer for our modern age. My younger sister is a Trumpie and I have heard those conspiracy theories she believes about how Trump supposedly is being targeted politically but is innocent. No concern for the constitution of democracy. But you wrote your feelings with gusto and power. Great read my friend.
John
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, John. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I hear you, I just don’t see how so many can’t see it, or choose not to see it. And some are the worst of the worst and actually go along with it. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MorePsychosis carried in the gales,for I am surely windblown,windward from my own psyche,where boundaries of reality have eroded.With concealed hands,a nonvisual hallucination caressesthe encasement of my soul,provoking verbal responses.Nothingness which wreathes around me,a curve in a state of nonexistencemeandering...
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This piece turns so well…
Word selection totally opens
up the experience…Righteous darkness…
Inspiring to me…
I am writing a story
about a group of poets
who commit group
suicide…Was gonna be three
ladies, who learn
one of them dying…Inspired by Eerie…
But then I decided
I would need more
bodies to qualify
for:Group suicide.
Hahaha.
I started the
story in first
person narrative
but I am thinking
of pulling out
of that and going
into omniscient,
if that’s even possible…🙂
Nicely done Daniel…
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Read MoreHe workedHe workedHe workedand worked He drankHe drankHe drankand drank His job wasn't to far from his homeHe would walk home the same route every dayIt wasn't the greatest neighborhoodHobo's were always near the liquor store he would stop by each...
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You told the story of this man with great power and a really strong and surprising ending. You clearly know the art of poetic story telling well.
John
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Hello John. Thank you so much for the read & the kind words. Appreciated.
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And the moral of the story is…..wait till your sober before going home.
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HA! Thanks Adira.
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Oh so true sire. Thanks!!
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Read MoreShe was the woman with no nameShe came in when they were leaving their offices to go home for the daySome of the staff tried to be polite and say hello in passingShe never said a word backShe would...
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You painted this picture like a scene on television. I like this.
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Thank you Fia. Appreciated!!
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You have a sensitivity and caring for this character that really must come from your compassionate soul. Loved this portrait you painted in verse.
John
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Hello John You’re comments inspire. Thanks a bunch!!
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Hello Adira. Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate you!!!
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A pearl of literary sensuality you have composed here. Love how you weave great literature into your prose. Like a finely crafted scene from an ancient book.
John