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Somewhat, yes. Thanks Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. A write with lots of layers, you’re Captain Hook my friend. I mean that in a good way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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All good Damian. Thanks man.
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Appreciate the feedback. Thanks Mary.
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Once again, a great and thought provoking writing, my friend! I agree absolutely that it is a waste of time to worship revengeful and judgmental God. It only supports the authorities in power who benefit from the fear and insecurity of the masses.
Personally, I believe that there is an immeasurable and intelligent energy behind of all of creation which doesn’t care about so called sins or acts of veneration. As we are born with a thinking mind, we are challenged to decide whether to create or to destroy.
A powerful piece,hats off!-
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You’re comments are awesome! Thank you for taking the time to read. xo
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Read MoreAh, the silvery grays of lust in our moonlight. My hand sliding down your milky skinmakes your breath steam from your lips. The night is chill, and we must mold our bodiesto be one island in a dark, frigid...
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Passionately penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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🔥 😀
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Love this story poem. It’s a mental transportation to another place.
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Read MoreMy great grandmother lived to be ninety-six years old. She lived through both world wars and the Great Depression. She passed in 1986, I believe. We visited her every Sunday without fail. From the time I was born till I...
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Well, that was an event, and I think you still did not pass that bulb since you still light up my friend. Enjoyed this piece. Oh, I do not like tomatoed based baked beans either. lol
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the story my friend. Well, thank you! What a thoughtful compliment, cuz. I like baked beans either way, but I do think it’s better without a tomato base. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I enjoyed this from beginning to end. I’d say your grandmother is still keeping an eye on you, my friend. She must know something…
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. Maybe someday I’ll know for sure. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It hit me that way, while I was writing it. It was a very authentic moment. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Some of the best writing you have ever shared with us. Sensational and held my interest. Nice work Damian.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. Well, guess that means I’m getting better at this gig. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I thoroughly enjoyed this story, Damian. I love the simplistic history that makes us all humans deep down, no matter if we try to hide it.
I have very vivid memories of one of my grannies. She was a tiny firecracker. Snap a chicken’s neck and yet tend to our little boo-boos with TLC with the same hand.
Burger Chef rocked!
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you enjoyed the story my friend. Cool, somebody remembers Burger Chef. lol. It is the simple things in our histories, that really show our similarities as human beings, couldn’t agree with you more. Grannies, are just different, in a good way. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreBut Why Poetry? Because we don't care if wecrash on its shore and sinkin its mud up to our knees. Because maybe inducing a stanzamight keep one's head above the surfaceof an old lover whose memorywon't leave us alone. Maybe someone writesat...
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Cleverly penned, Tim. Oh, the life of a writer. Reading this was like Deja Vu my friend. Amazing work. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian. :))
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Nice! “Because”, is the perfect answer to why we write poetry. So many possibilities, reasons, inspirations behind that magical word. I agree with Damian. Very clever write, my friend.
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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Amen brother!
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Thank you Styx. 🙂
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Interesting thought. you mean he/she will fade into obscurity if you do not think of it.