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Thank you, Styxian.;)) Hope you have been doing well.
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I caught a bad case of covid last week! It kicked my ass! It went through my work and got a few of us. I’m all better now!
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Oh man you had the summer vid. I had that 3 weeks ago. I’m glad you’re better.
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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How exciting!! I’m late to the post but the video put me right there with ya!
Congrats amiga:)-
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Thank you Adel;))
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Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian good morning ❤️
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This poem is a vivid, honest look at desire – full of passion but also quiet vulnerability. The contrast between the “neon God” and “bluebirds” is striking and memorable.
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thank you graciously lovely poetess ❤️
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I feel these words. They are otherworldly, uttered from another world beyond the one we inhabit.
Kind regards
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thank you graciously dearest James what a beautiful thought ❤️
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Read MoreThe loneliness of lips as Hollywood scripts unread, tells mother mouth to only speak in whispers Within and without each biography has a margin, but fuck protocol tonight the moon is slut coloured red sensual are the bed sheet library Up and over, around and below what side of the...
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The moon is slut colored red. Yes!!! Love this
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everyone should lie under a slut moon, every now and then!
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hello dearest poet you make me wonder who you are I think you know me from DU…this is so full of hunger and passion ❤️ p.s there were only a few that really impressed me but clearly you are one…
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you do know me brenda. does strangeways rob ring bells? i was terminally hooked to the ‘music thread’
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high Rob and yes you did always impress me 😊
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I like how the poem moves beautifully from quiet whispers to a bold, sensual crescendo. The shift from the quiet “loneliness of lips” to the sudden, overwhelming urgency of the final lines is brilliant. I never would have thought to describe the moon as “slut coloured red” -that vivid, daring language perfectly captures the poem’s alive energy.
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i love how you interpret my tatty words. you just may have inspired me to write something called ‘slut’. that word carries such negative connotations, but within the language lexicon, it is a universal desire scream. thank you romaj.
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Read MoreHeld as grenade coloured fingerprints from a love crime scene, Darling, Night Arrived without you Turning memory until wrist snapped, one man solved the cube in three seconds but for others, decades play dice with never-ending seasons Red was the seductive flame of her dress kindle...
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you are a master writer so full of passion makes me long to know you ❤️
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you do know me crim. lol. i’m also great friends with poetspeak & styxian.
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Raw and unforgettable, this poem is an unfiltered outpouring of a messy, deeply-felt heartbreak.
Grief, love, and memory twist together like the cube itself, and the striking imagery -from the “petrol pirouette” to the painful truth that “yellow bleeding into orange doesn’t always promise a sunset” perfectly captures that internal chaos.
The frustration of the Rubik’s Cube beautifully reflects the struggle to reconcile a beautiful memory with the painful reality of loss and betrayal.
I love it. It’s brilliant and beautifully written.
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Wow RomaJ ,you have a job as the editor of my never to be published poetry collection. Not that I have any desire to be published. It’s enough to know my words have touched the soul of one across the Atlantic. It was a task to compress my train-crash love life into one poem. Diolch.
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Cool stuff Fia !