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Sappho (Elke)
6 months, 3 weeks ago

“Masks conceal the cruelest intentions
Orchestrated fear designed to control”
Wow! This is a powerful statement that holds much truth! You just have to listen carefully to politicians. They tell you everything they intent to do, hidden between distracting words.
Brilliant work, Damian!
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Two of my favorite lines as well. Exactly, they tell a lot these days. It’s all hidden in plain sight. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Neville
6 months, 3 weeks ago

Not only true enough but my word yours here look so pretty sitting on their very own page .. Neville
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Well you know how to make a person feel appreciated. Thanks to you kind sir. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Atticus Abbey
6 months, 3 weeks ago

Fantastic, Damian!
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Adagio. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Visions_of_Insanity
6 months, 3 weeks ago

Phenomenal piece Damian. Makes ya think. Powerful write my friend.
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m always trying to evoke thought brother. lol. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Willow
6 months, 3 weeks ago

Okay, Prophet, you did it again. They only wear the mask long enough to lull the sheep. The wolves are out in force now, no masks. And you nailed this one like a jackhammer of Truth. I really wish you weren’t so deadly accurate…but here we are. That vault of yours must be packed with treasure, my friend
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Believe me I wish I wasn’t accurate. The wolves are taking everything that’s not nailed down. Including those boots we’re supposed to pull ourselves up with, we’re essentially strapless. lol. “Jackhammer of Truth” sounds like a possible song or album name. There are a couple of gems in there from time to time. I agree though the masks have been discarded. Always enjoy your commentary, sorry I tend to get you riled you up so often. lol. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Thomas W. Case
6 months, 3 weeks ago

Tight, relentless lines. This feels like a pressure chamber where thought turns toxic and power hides behind masks. I like how the poem doesn’t over-explain—just lets the spiral speak for itself. Dark, current, and uncomfortably true.
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Thomas. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I’m a believer of letting the reader fill in the gaps with their thoughts and where the write takes them. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Styxian
6 months, 3 weeks ago

Nice! Tightly done yet with a bullseye message. The rhymes are perfect, too. Excellent write Damian.
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Thanks for your continued support. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian
Tim
6 months, 3 weeks ago

You were ahead of your time, Damian. This applies today as if it was written yesterday. Great poem!
- Damian DeadLove
  6 months, 2 weeks ago
  
  Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Appreciate you.
  
  Damian

M.E
6 months, 3 weeks ago

This poem made me imagine a wandering lycan. Nice write! “)
- Knight
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  I’d take the sea over lycans.
  Thanks for reading.
  Regards James
Fia Naturie
6 months, 3 weeks ago

Listen to the YouTube page after I read it. Very ominous. I like it.
Knight
6 months, 3 weeks ago

Thanks for reading and listening.
Regards James
Thomas W. Case
6 months, 3 weeks ago

This hits like a nightmare you can’t wake up from — stark, elemental, unforgiving.
Wolves, sea, bone, oubliette… nothing sentimental here, just extinction rendered clean and cold.
- Knight
  6 months, 3 weeks ago
  
  Dark times with little hope. Yet people endure some how. People keep fighting.
  Thanks for reading
  Regards James

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