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Ooo, did it now. Nice;)
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I love it when you skip the conventional, and just flow like spilt honey all over the page, Fia – encore! x
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Thank you Hjx
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Great use of words and rhymes. Awesome job here.
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Thank you ..I appreciate that Vision;))
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A sensual poem, written with the precision of a master key. Or should I say: Mistress key!
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Haha, thank you M.E;))
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Passionately penned, Fia. A very seductive write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian 😊
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Oh damn! That’s some fierce wordplay there! You built that to perfection!
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Thank you Willow 😊
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Amazingly written.. I’m looking for more.. ☺️
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Haha thank you Christopher 😊
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Key
When did you get the key to my door
It’s been locked for so long
I remember when I put the bolt and nail it to the floor
Fear and hurt infused the metal like a song
You inserted a key
Turned it to the right
I stood before you
I the softest moonlight
You really looked at me
Realizing what I was w…Read More
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What a subtle erotic poem Fia. The key turns, oh the possibilities!! -Curt
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Thank you. I wanted to play on using object as terms for intimacy
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Where Rivers Wander and
Fia Naturie are now friends
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Curly Grace posted in the group National Poetry Month
Pouring Emotions
Streaming tears
down my face,
ever flowing
not from sadness
nor grief.A frenzy you created
within my body,
immense emotions flying,
overwhelming me
with nowhere to go
but to trickle down
my cherry-red cheeks.![]()
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© 2011
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Curly Grace, the poem emotionally exquisite, the art wonderful. A very fitting day 9 of Poetry month
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Thank you, Redzone. That’s really kind of you to say. I’m glad the emotion landed the way it needed to.
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Where Rivers Wander wrote a new post
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Read MoreI’ll trace each sparkAlongThe shadowed bends,MeetingEvery flickerWhere the river flows. To drownIn that riverTasting secrets forbiddenIn a valley’s embraceThe flicker you litIs nowThe flame that grows Following your riverI driftTasting the flickerIn the valley’s foldWhere forbidden warmthTurns each pulseInto a quiet...
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Panting…Yeah, this hot. Like it;))
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Thank you. More to come. Hope you enjoy
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This appears to be a metaphor for a consuming lust. Something that draws in more and more heated passion the more it flows. Thrusting deeper. The last stanza sums it up nicely.
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Thank you!
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Passionately penned, WRW. A very steamy write my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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definitely more… crap… this touched me more than you think