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Read MoreIt was my third assignment for the Cohol Tribune. My boss thought it would be best for me to go and interview an upcoming environmentalist, named Caleb. Stewart. I didn't realize I would need to travel to Scotland for...
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Thank you, I would love to write one of those someday.
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I enjoyed this. Comparing the kiss to drinking water is imaginative–I like it. I need to “see” the action in a story, and that was easy with this. Probably because I’m a very foolish (and hopeless) romantic, I feel bad when romance has to take a back seat to life goals. Maybe she’ll see him again?
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Thank you, Sam. She has to choose who she is going to be with among the shot glasses. I appreciate you reading this.
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I just love how this unfolds. The character development of the Scottish man is truly outstanding. And your grasp of the Scottish lingo is truly amazing. I love how you made the Scottish words so clearly understandable yet authentic. And the story telling is fabulous.
John
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Thank you . I tried with the language to make it sound authentic
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Read MoreCalling all those who fish I have an idea that's delish Can you write about the catch Not the one that you threw back I have a Twist in mind Not all fish are one of a kind The catch can be by sea or...
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this makes me think of metaphors for getting with someone romatically and going to the flea market and haggling for the write price haggling with a whore sorry Fia it’s the images your challenge brought 💕
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It’s fine. Go for it and write crimsin
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I cast desire upon the tide,
My fingers tremble for her weight
A secret urge I cannot hide,
My bait a promise, sweet as fate.She rises shimmering, bare and bold,
Her flanks and curve inflame the air
Enticing as forbidden gold,
She stirs my blood with fevered dare.She fights, resists, with sultry grace,
Her finish slick against my skin;
The pull, the yield, our swift embrace
She swallows lust, I drink her in.On shore, still dripping wet with lust,
Her form revealed, full-bodied, wild
We meet as lovers, freed and flushed
My catch, my craving, reconciled-
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Oh wow, Peter that was good
Thank you for participating
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Read MoreWhat I can't understand is how poetry falls into my hand like glittering stars in the sky. I picked one I can't lie. The pull it has over me to give it to all of you. You say I've given so many away I Hoping that...
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I hear you beautiful Fia people take them too seriously which hinders our creativity as it just flows I went through an anger period when I was going through a tough time and lost a lot of followers because of it peace to you lady let it come as it will 💕
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Thank you, crimsin ;))
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Its a gift to be able to express feeling with words..I’m glad you have the gift 🌼
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Thank you, Joe ;))
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Words have serious magical power….that’s why we call it SPELLING. I’m sure you’ve that one before, but it’s true. Where do thoughts and inspiration come from? Poetry is the great filter. Use responsibly.
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You are correct. Thank you Benjamin;))
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Cleverly penned, Fia. I always enjoy your musings. Phenomenal write, cuz. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate that,cuz
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I think of my poetry as not by me. It’s by little ghost in my ear nagging me till I write their words down hehe. Wonderful ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick😊
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I can’t even count the emotions I’ve given ink to. Without poetry…I have no voice. Without a voice…we fade. Very nice
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Thank you, Willow;))
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Read MoreI never asked to shoulder your weightBut here I amWith every burden I takeYou don’t give a damnYou assume I don't feelBecause you read what I wroteYou assume I am healedYou're wrong. I stand here brokeI strive every day to...
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Could feel these words my friend, excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian ☺️
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There is true and honest pain here, so palpable I can almost touch it.
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Thank you Detritus ☺️
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A powerful piece written with heart blood. An empath can feel what is Hidden behind the words. Vibrations speak louder and clearer than words. Great work Fia!
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Thank you, Sappho, appreciate that:))
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One of the hardest things is trying to help and being pushed away.
Great ink, friend.
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Thank you, Nick;))
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So true. I can write it down…to give me release for the moment at hand. But somethings live on forever. You can’t delete it. I wish I could. Oh no! Another thought coming on!!!
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I just wrote Edit My Life after writing my comment.
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Haha you were inspired? cool
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It seems that a lot of times, when I comment on someone’s work, the way I relate turns into my own next submission.
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It happens to me sometimes. I enjoyed it.
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Thanks
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I feel this. The weight of another persons sorrow. A moving piece.
Kind regards
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Thank you, James;))
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Be needed, never need. The door never swings the same both ways. Tight
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Thank you Me.
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Read MoreI was born from two people who did not know what they created A force to be reckoned with, never to be underestimated. As I walk into the room, all eyes are on me. Smooth like iceNot seeing the fire being set free What they don't...
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fucking shit…. I left for a few weeks now you want me dead… ok im leaving
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Don’t you dare leave.
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Um…duly noted. Definitely destruction incarnate
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Thank you, Willow
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This is rather unsettling knowing the devastation that’s so common these days with active shooters. Very scary.
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I did not want you to feel that way. Going with the prompt I created with Ambyr, He picked creation, and I chose to go with devastation. That encompasses Fire, Water, Ice
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No problem. The poem has a lot of weight to it and a lot of fire in its delivery.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. This is a change of pace my friend, you always prove there is no subject you can’t tame. It’s too close to call, you both delivered amazing writes. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I needed to stretch and get out of comfort zone
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You nailed this one. No doubt about it. The kind of write that pulls you along in an inexorable tide of power and rhyme. I keep envisioning cement shoes while reading 😁
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Haha well that’s interesting. Thank you Detritus
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Brilliantly penned, Fia. Wonderful storytelling, it kinda reminds me of a sitcom my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian