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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreSpeak to meWords insight and exciteSpeak to meCradle me in actionSpeak to meTell me the nuance of your touchSpeak to meI overflow in anticipationSpeak to meLet it be rough and rawSpeak to metake me in the dark so I...
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Thank you so much, Adel. It was fun.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Passionately penned, Fia. This write was fire my friend. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian,))
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I feel that this is a calling out that we al can relate to, and be enthralled by. it’s an all consuming request that is determined and also inviting too. Like “give me that and I’ll give you this” type of trade. We write with emotions, so perhaps we look for emotions in return. Yeah?
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Thank you Styxian;))
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Fia, I could feel the entreaty of the woman as she beseeched her lover to give her words. I do agree the right words can make for a magical night in our out of bed. This poem speaks to me in a way that I could feel. Very well done.
John
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Thank you, John;))
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Oh yes! Tell me more…more…more!
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Ooo, RPM. (Smiling)
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Adelphina wrote a new post
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Read MoreUpon the sharpest Hook moon of fright Answering the call Of a newborn nightSummoning inside this Rusted metal shed Surrounded by misted Red air of dread Remnants of lovers From who I...
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Yes..vampires, werewolves and the goes bump on hollioween..
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Thanks Fia! I wanted it to sound almost like a lullaby. lol
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Hello, can I interest you in a Frankenstein type guy? LOL.
I love when you get all voracious! This is a dare ya write, you know!
Okay okay. Enchanting write, Vampira! I love the aggressiveness of it, the baring of fangs and display of an appetite for human consumption…
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I was in the mood after reading all the fun stuff
And you are just my type mister. Perfect. 😍
I’m glad I enchanted you with my fangs!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damien!
I enjoy fantasy horror.
I love Van Helsing! The one with Hugh Jackman.
And The Mummy with Brendon Fraser.Thanks for checking this out amigo!
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Nice and spooky for the Halloween season. 🙂
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Tis the season Tim!
Now I need a huge bag of Snickers and Twix! HahahaLater gator!
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Even though I am not a huge fan of Halloween, this is pretty cool .. in fact it’s bloody much better than that .. Neville 🐈⬛🖤🐧😎👍
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Nev, amigo!
When I think of Halloween I remember getting on the tailgate of my dad’s truck with my friends to go trick or treating.
Some of my best memories. We would do each other’s makeup and have a blast. lol
There are a few neighborhoods in my hometown that still go all. People will park a block away and walk with their kids up and down the neighborhood.I’m glad you enjoyed the write! Now go take advantage of all the awesome chocolate varieties on Halloween 🎃
Snickers & Twix! Even the Reese’s peanut butter cups are cool:)-
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You can beat an egg and a drum but you can’t beat a Twix can ya eh’ 😎👍
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Oh! This is good.
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Thank you!
I wanted it to sound like a dark tale from Disney. lol
Hope that made sense!
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Tis the season for the undead. Great ink.
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Thank you! It was fun to write!
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An interesting write, suitable for the season.
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Well hello there Mr. FlatDaddy!
I wrote this around three years ago. I was in a vampy witchy mood. lol
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
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This is deep. We all feel isolated and surrounded by the dark at one time or another. Felt this.
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Thank you, Fia.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Tim. Lots of layers and depth in this write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for reading Damian. 🙂
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Yet, you ARE a bright light nonetheless Tim. Shine on!
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I appreciate that my friend. Thanks. 🙂
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Boom. You bring the reader along for the ride. Excellent.
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Thanks Thomas. 🙂
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Read MoreI wish I'd seen him in Fairmountwith a Stetson hat, blue jeans, and boots;or with his collar turned up on a drizzly day,before his fast life crashed throughthe intersectionof folklore and fame..Before his sleek silver Spydergripped him to death in...
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You gotta be talking about James Dean. Taken way too early.
It was a preventable tragedy. Getting too comfortable in a fast car isn’t good!
Fast cars and young men can be a death sentence if you are not cautious.-
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Yes, tragic unforeseeable events can always alter life if one is not careful.
“He’s gotta see us.” Dean’s last words.
Thank you adelly.
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Beautiful tribute to James Dean. He loved speed, freedom, and the open road… his passion became both his muse and his undoing. He adored his Little Bastard, and though he burned bright and brief, his legend never slowed down. I like to imagine he’s still racing somewhere in eternity.
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That’s a fun thought. Thank you, Romaj.
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent tribute my friend I liked this a lot. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m glad you liked it, thank you, Damian.
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Tim wrote a new post
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Read MoreAt one time, where we lived, morning commuters stood on long wooden platforms, patiently waiting and watching for a dark blue train with wicker seats. The light posts that rose above the shoulders of the metal railing were a smudgy light green color that looked like shower heads. Earlier...
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I like the old trains. It’s like being transported to the past when you get to sit in one. Went to a train exhibit once.
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I remember them well. Thanks for the comment, Fia.
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You described such a great time. Where safety was expected and not out of the ordinary.
Everyone was at ease and not erratic. Nowadays you never know.
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Right you are. I thank you for your comment. :))
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Powerfully penned, Tim. Excellent write my friend, I remember when railroad crossings and locomotives were abundant as well. Dig this! Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks for all your comments, Damian. They’re much appreciated. 🙂
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Ooohhh. This is good!
Loved take me in the dark so I can see the light
Enjoyed the snapshot lines.