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Read MoreIntimacy left the bedroom, drifted quietly down the street. Wanting only human closeness, with no intent to cheat. It wandered past the neighbours, took a shortcut through the park. Noticed couples leaning inwards, who had not lost their spark. It walked backed twenty paces, sat beside a nameless...
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Thanks Damian…..watch out for those Gnomes.
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I love the idea of this, the imagery. The whole gnome part almost, but not quite, adds a whimsy to it. Yet the despair overcomes that brief slide towards “not so bad”. The ending is perfect. The whole write is great stuff.
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Cool write Peter. Very creative.
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Cleverly penned, Amethyste. Muses can be tricky, they like to play games as well. lol. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Hugs and love.
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I fell in love with my muse.
She was too sexy for her shirt (blouse).
I was cooked.-
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Me too. 🙂
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Read MoreI used to know her when we were ten.We spent a lot of time together.But I didn't know what it meant. She told me one day,please listen close.It's been a while,and we've gotten quite close.She used to take me out...
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I get way she loved you is different than the way she loved the other but you still reminis about it
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I am her by the way,it’s metaphorical
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Nicely done
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Read Moreit was the immaculate conception inconceivable as it was me being birthed from the womb of man's ideology...motherless never nurtured from the essence of her femininity an umbilical cord just a figment of my sentimental imagination i arrive as a prophet in my own right and though i...
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Hahaha, the transition from the giver of life to the taker, from the peacemaker to the shit starter. The power of making a coward a brave individual, with the right plan a beggar could live comfortably. We want to discuss this with you soon, tight
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Yep. This is how it is. Cowards becoming bullies though access to firearms.
Conflict resolution takes on a different meaning. Big thx or the commentary, broMuch respect
Naaj
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Brilliantly penned, Naaj. This is a powerful write my friend, I dig the layers and incredible storytelling brother. This is next level good, much respect sir. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Glad you dug the layers, bro. This is an ongoing conversation in my head
that I tried to unpack without rambling.Big thx and much respect
Naaj
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I would have never imagined thinking of a firearm this way. I love the way you kept writing it in a verse of the testament as if you scribing it into the book
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Fia, the way you read was the way it lowed and yes…there is a book in my mind in regard to this topic [gun violence]
I’m glad you enjoyed chapter oneMuch respect
Naaj
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Incredible write. Totally captivating for the reader. It is bold but not violent. It simply speaks of the potential for…
This is a great write, Naajir. Very thick with detail and circumstance. Awesome.-
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Yeah I dug this one up as a conversation piece. Glad you enjoyed the journey
Much respect
Naaj
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Man, I hate guns! Loud popping sounds in general trigger me a bit. I remember a time when we fought with bats, bricks, and small knives. Some were good with their fists. My main criticism about self-defense with a gun is that some idiot will pull that sucker in a panic and shoot himself or some bystander. A lotta folks don’t even consider that. There was a time when only specialized warriors held that kind of fear & respect. Now any ol’ fool can be a serious danger. The Devil’s world in a nutshell. Great topic!
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Read Moresick and tired of the masses being such idiots give me a canister and a light burn this town to the mother fucking ground yeah, if they want a fight we can fight fuck the police when they resort to violence killing our brothers and...
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Excellent write my friend. Spitting facts on this one. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian