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Read MoreA month ago,I met this man.A guy,I call a fictional man.I want him,for he is not real. He's on paper,but love is what I feel.This year has been really rough.And life has been really tough. I guess I used it to...
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I love the way you use repetition in this piece, and the rhyme is really nice. I like the message. Fictional men have no faults, so they are easy to fall for. It reminds me of an old song called Imaginary Lover by Atlanta Rhythm Section.
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Brilliantly penned, my friend. Incredible write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI kiss my Delilah,Molten love pours from my soul,Igniting her with sweet madness.I melt her with flattery,As fire does to snow,In wakeful dreams I’m not alone.
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I feel it could be a lot lengthier.
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And thank you 😊
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Beautifully penned, Daniel. Can’t fix what ain’t broken my friend. Perfect as is. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreShe told me she loved me by the water fountain.It's where we met.Where we dreamt,where our home was.And where we slept.She told me she loved me more than him.Her voice sounding sad and grim.It's been a good while since...
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Also,inspired off Alec Benjamin’s single, “”Water Fountain”.
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Beautifully penned. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I could relate to this poem. It’s not “stupid”. We all fall for “fictional” men and women.