Did not know sharks are older than Saturn’s rings. Figures, they are rulers of their domain. This is an interesting piece like the underwater theme. I feel that you are bringing attention to the destruction of the oceans. At least that is what I am getting from this,

hello dearest poet I love the way you wove the rhythm with the words it sounded like an old pirate… sharks terrify me I have had nightmares of being lost at sea swimming among them but I guess I should fear the land sharks more great write 💕

The flow of this…pardon the pun…is amazing. There’s calm & destruction found in the depths of the ocean. Definitely will be returning to read this again

Aww that the plea in the asking is precious

you do everytime I read you I am brimming with your essence 💕

Passionately penned, Daniel. Fantastic write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

hi Benny this is very good…my observations are on constant play my mind never quiets I only use tech to silence my mind somewhat it doesn’t work though…my nightmares are intense to say the least 💕

Thanks Crimsin…..I do get some respite. by meditation.Mornings are a bit shitty but like you ….just keep going.

Oh my….this was brilliant! I wasn’t sure where it was going until I got halfway through & recognized familiar territory. Yeah, watching the mind can be all-consuming, healing & hurting…all at the same time.

Beautifully penned, Daniel. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian