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Read MoreI draft myself in graphite,sketching outlines of a manI promise I will someday be.The paper is thin,creases spreading like doubtsin the corner of my mind.Every page begins with fire,but each ember diesbefore the ink arrives.Half built towers,unfinished bridges,I leave...
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Thank you Damian
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“Notebooks stacked like coffins”
love that line.
I think our whole lives are a rough draft…but will the final essay ever be written?
I wonder.
But I don’t wonder about whether or not I like this piece. I love every part of it.
When the silence comes, I want a signed copy.
j.
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No one in their right or indeed write mind wants to feel down or depressed .. I found this post/poem very much to my liking indeed it was compelling .. Kind regards, Neville
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When you’ve been there, you know
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Peter, this touched my heart. Suffering is used to refine and strengthen us, much like a blacksmith uses a furnace to refine precious metals. Stay strong. 🌹🌾🕊️
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Alexandria et al
Thanks for reading and the comments.Its nice when others understand not just the words but the author.
Love you all
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I’ve had my share of dark thoughts. I don’t want to go back to that place. One can only hope the future is better.
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Read MoreNo matter how hard it gets I'm still here still holding on because losing you feels impossible to bear even when the nights are heavy and the silence cuts deep I find myself reaching for you not letting go...
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Read MoreI'm still with you even when things are messy even after all the pain I can't picture a future where you're not by my side I know what we've been through isn't easy we both been hurt and sometimes...
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Phenomenally penned, Fred. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend, I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian