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Amethyste wrote a new post
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Read MoreAnytime I say a word,I finger-tip the net of your nerve.Draw a physical on your haze.Like now. I want to drawPink jasmineOn the canvas of your head.
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Ok. As you wish. 🙂
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![Profile picture of Jim Musics]()
Oh!!? I’d love to make several suggestions. Not just a wish, but a vivid day/night dream. I think you are very powerful dear.
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Thank you. 🙂
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You made my day dear. Poetry is my life and being percepted in a good way causes an erupting volcano in me. Take care.
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Wise words.
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Read MoreHow did I forget your faceWhen I can still feel your embraceHow can I still smell youBut fail to recognize these pictures in which I held youMy disease is the worstAt least that's what people say when they remind...
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Powerfully penned, Drieks. Into the book it belongs! Excellent lyrics my friend, your work is so authentic and direct. I’m truly a fan, good musical choice as well. The piano added the proper element to your words. Nicely done per usual. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. I always love reading your thoughts on my work. Appreciate you!
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I love a good piano song. This feels very intimate and un-rushed.
It has a great tempo too. There are not a lot of distractions either. Just a voice and a piano.
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Thank you so much! Your words bring warmth to my heart ❤️
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Adelphina was raving about this to me earlier, so I had to check it out. And it’s really good! Not syrupy or overdone. It’s catchy and very entertaining. Awesome job with it.
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Thank you for your kind words Styxian. I’m so happy to hear you enjoyed it!
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Drieks, I smiled the whole way through listening to this. This was sad but catchy.
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Thank you Fia! So happy to make you smile! 💕
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I man…damn. This is incredibly well done!
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Thank you so much Willow! ❤️
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Thank you so much for your kind words!
If only it was my own voice… Can’t take credit for that. -
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❤️
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We’ve kept up wit your musical success through mutual friends, and we’re truly happy for you. You’re not only creating great poetry but also great songs. Tight
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Thank you so much for the kind words!
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Great song. I loved the piano and the strength of the vocals. Well done!
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Thank you RPM! I appreciate it.
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Wow. Just wow! Another incredible piece. You are doing marvelous work, my friend. This is truly outstanding. Beautiful words, lovely music and all of it rendered with class. I am so glad that HER said I must talk to you. I would very much like to do that.
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Thank you so much! I’ll get back to you tomorrow if that’s ok 🙏🏻
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Absolutely.
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Read MoreI don't know whose idea it was.To make the villains attractive at first sight.Whose choice was it and why? Why do we feel attraction or fly?Oh,and why can't it be the good guy?Standing there,catching my eye. But being attracted to the...
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Read MoreIn blackened dreamsa mist descends from the hills Unsuspecting Only the dust moves,like a funeral veil of melancholy Sorrow The traveler of unknown plainsthrough darkness & light Confusion Flowers of desirable bloomLethal in touch and smell Death
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This feels haunting and ethereal. The imagery of mist, dust, and fatal blossoms captures that eerie beauty of twilight so well. A powerful blend of melancholy and mystery.
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Hi Romaj. Thanks for the feedback. Appreciated!
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Very scary walk. I love the description.
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Perfect for the time of year. Thanks Fia.
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I love this twilight mood in the forest which you describe perfectly here. A little dangerous, magical and most mystical! A mind blowing imagery in this awesome poem, my friend!
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Thanks my dear friend…Always!
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Powerfully penned, Keith. Into the book it belongs! Dig this, brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thanks Damian. You rock!
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Over deliciously penned, my friend.
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Your comments are very gracious. Appreciate it
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Damn was not going to survive anyway. It was his time. I feel sorry for him
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Don’t feel sorry for him. I heard he was a troublemaker. Thanks Fia.
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Shit happens.. Again one of your wonderfully sarcastic poems, dear Keith!
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Yes it does. Thanks Elke.
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Powerfully penned, Keith. It’s that time of year, when you tell halloween stories. With a name like, Rusty Trombone, he was dealt a bad hand from the start. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It is October. Let’s get crazy. Thanks Damian.
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Your halloweenish spooky words are the best for the month…
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Your comments fulfill my devilish ideas. Thanks PAR.
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