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Read MoreContinued… Alayna came back. She was to be my first appointment that morning and throughout the night before at home in bed, I thought about her. All of her. Her feel, her taste, and that spark of a crush. A...
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Thought it would be a nice twist to the storyline, haha!
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Damn harsh ending. This was steamy, and the read was quick. I really enjoyed it
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Thanks. Unhappy endings can be the best endings to a story, haha. Steamy and quick is a great combination of course for erotica, hehe.
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Read MoreI was sick of it now I'm done with it tired of the rush, rush, rush I've given enough to people who are lazy fucks outrageous expectations working 7 days a week they act like I'm a machine one that doesn't get weak and tired, frustrated, angry asking me...
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This is fucking great! Love it. Can totally relate.
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Powerfully penned, Nick. Honest fucking write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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I’m conflicted, I don’t know whether to feel happy or sad that I can relate. Great ink, Nick.
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The picture you painted here is spot on, and wow, written so well. Nick
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Benjamin Scraps and
Betty are now friends
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this is beautiful and inspiring lovely one ❤️
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I hope it gives other women strength when they want to quit.
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Powerfully penned, SW. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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D,
Thank you for your kind words. Thank you for following my work as long as you have been. I never thought I’d have anyone follow my work. Especially since I only started 3 years ago and with no experience at all. I write from emotion and only rhymes because that’s the style I love.
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H,
Thank you, I felt this one deeply as I do almost each piece. Everyone struggles once in a while. But struggles also produce beautiful things, struggles can help us find our roots and dig them in deep. If I could be a tree I’d be a weeping willow. Strong and flowing.
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Read MoreI had always heard, mainly from my two older brothers, that one should never get married. Be a player and own your freedom. These words echo still as I have no children and no ex-wife—my own life and liberty....
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I love the build-up, the initial nervousness on Alayna’s part, her relaxation, increasing confidence, their red hot sex! This has to be one of the best real life erotic stories, I’ve read anywhere, Daniel other than my own, of course! I’m thrilled for you, very well done indeed! More, please, mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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More indeed! The build-up is essential in erotica – anticipation heightens the pleasure! And thank you for the kind words. I’m going to be focusing on erotica for a while now as I enjoy writing it.
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I agree about build-up, Daniel, but don’t make it too interminably long like some writers on Inkitt – readers like me will soon get bored and lose interest. That’s why I’m successfully writing flash fiction now – quick thrills for all + instant reaction = fun! fun! fun! xx
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Tomorrow?? We have to wait till tomorrow. This is good, Daniel.
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Sensational, Daniel! Role reversal at her most punishing! xx