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Benjamin Scraps and
Betty are now friends
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I hope it gives other women strength when they want to quit.
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Dear S,
I really appreciated the push and pull of this piece. It’s so true, when one is in strife the notion of walking away is so strong but the giving up…never! Great write. H🌷
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H,
Thank you, I felt this one deeply as I do almost each piece. Everyone struggles once in a while. But struggles also produce beautiful things, struggles can help us find our roots and dig them in deep. If I could be a tree I’d be a weeping willow. Strong and flowing.
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Powerfully penned, SW. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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D,
Thank you for your kind words. Thank you for following my work as long as you have been. I never thought I’d have anyone follow my work. Especially since I only started 3 years ago and with no experience at all. I write from emotion and only rhymes because that’s the style I love.
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Read MoreI had always heard, mainly from my two older brothers, that one should never get married. Be a player and own your freedom. These words echo still as I have no children and no ex-wife—my own life and liberty....
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I love the build-up, the initial nervousness on Alayna’s part, her relaxation, increasing confidence, their red hot sex! This has to be one of the best real life erotic stories, I’ve read anywhere, Daniel other than my own, of course! I’m thrilled for you, very well done indeed! More, please, mister! Harriet-Jacqui xx
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More indeed! The build-up is essential in erotica – anticipation heightens the pleasure! And thank you for the kind words. I’m going to be focusing on erotica for a while now as I enjoy writing it.
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I agree about build-up, Daniel, but don’t make it too interminably long like some writers on Inkitt – readers like me will soon get bored and lose interest. That’s why I’m successfully writing flash fiction now – quick thrills for all + instant reaction = fun! fun! fun! xx
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Tomorrow?? We have to wait till tomorrow. This is good, Daniel.
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Read MoreAfter a long conversationWhere we could understand each otherI thought to myselfIt is niceI can connectThen a shade of pleasure passed over my face.
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Always dig your observations my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreI’m not weak. And to be honest, I’m not strong either.. I’m the perfect balance of both; I’d bet that you are neither. Your weakness of the flesh, with your emotions suppressed, drowning in temptation, but oh sweet baby, I’ve not tempted you yet. I’m resistant to...
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Keep on, keepin’ on. It’s great!
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Thank you xx
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The flow is perfect and I the defiance at the end fits this poem so well. I like it.
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Defiance is one of my strong suits. Thank you, dearest Fia. xx
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Well phrased battle of wills 🌼
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I appreciate it. xx
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Great flow and a very smart human, to tight
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I thank you dear. xx
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Great write PG.
Those that yield to temptation fail to see the price they have to pay and often become addicted to choice of drug…. booze,food,gambling ,porn,sex,excersise etc.To yield occasionally is being human…💋
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Absolutely Peter, you get it. The price is too high, and I am too cheap. 😉 Thanks for reading. xx
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I agree with Fia, “defiance” suits this poem well. Not to mention the flow of this piece!
Daniel
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Daniel, thank you. Wasn’t there a saying about defiant girls? Or does my memory fail me? lol xx
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Phenomenal piece. Nicely said and executed!
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Keith, you are always appreciated my dear friend. Thank you for reading. xx
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Beautifully penned, PG. Excellent write my friend, I always love the layers in your writes. Always something bubbling underneath the surface. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dearest Damian, I have to keep things exciting. Thank you for reading, it’s always a pleasure. xx
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this is beautiful and inspiring lovely one ❤️