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Read MoreLioness of the Desert Julian stretched, the clatter of china against ceramic a small rebellion in the hushed breakfast room of their Marrakesh riad. Outside, the morning light, already fierce, began its daily assault on the city’s ochre walls....
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Thank you so much Fia. Much appreciate you reading and your most kind words on my story, my friend. Most grateful.
John
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Read More3rd Rock from the Sun .... burned beyond recognition .........crashed landed.... Spiritually branded Enchanted by that ...infernal Genie in a Bottle Gaslit from Day One...de-deuced from Adamant ....,,,to just a damned ant... Panting...ranting...in past tense .... full of pre-tense Full of Shit... ...a Facsimile therein of...trying to catfish...His own...
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Brilliantly penned, Naaj. Excellent write my friend. Dig the layers in this one it’s a hard hitting powerhouse that’s spitting facts. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Big thx for your energy on this vibe, bro.
Deeply appreciated indeedNaaj
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Oh, I am glad I discovered this (not for all, but for me) and I must ask you this: have you made any audios of your work? this is only the second one of your works I have read, and it begs the be heard. I must say I’m a bit prejudiced in that, being one who comes from that stable, but this really would be even more impressive aloud. Nice work, sir.
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I haven’t done any audits yet but will be in the near future. Thx for the positive vibes, FD.
Much respect
Naaj
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If you do, let me know; we have a Spoken Word category here now and a lot of us are building a library, of sorts, of diverse works. Check it out; there are some excellent pieces there.
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Read MoreI take pleasure looking at youYou are so beautiful boyYou look as ifAs ifAs if you were kissed by the sun.
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Beautifully penned, Amethyste. Excellent write per usual my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. All the best.
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Fantastic, Amethyst.
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Thank you dear.
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RICHARD "Rascal" JENKINS posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
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“SESSIONS ARE HELD WEDNESDAYS”
Our next weekly session will be on
Wednesday, December 31th, 2025.
Taking a break for the holidays.
“MERRY CHRISTMAS, ONE & ALL!”
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Read MoreBah humbug it's that time of year,fill our fat bellies,guzzle some beer.Over do everything,shop till we drop,Christmas a circus,a giant big top.It's not about family, not anymore,it's more about getting and what you can score.It's stressful and lonely for...
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It seems that the more favorable holiday has shifted to thanks giving.
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Even Thanksgiving has been corrupted by overconsumption.
How many turkeys were thankful….lol
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Cleverly penned, Peter. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Dear P,
I found quite a bit of dark humor very relatable in this write. I really appreciated this point of view. The loneliness and pushed commercialism can be overwhelming and sad. Terrific write. H🌷
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I like the way you story tell. You take everything into consideration when building the tale. Nicely done