so beautiful and true dearest Brandon ❤️

Thank you Crimsin

I really dig the subtle description of the savior. I went back and read it again, knowing more exact the person you’ve wrote of.
It’s a good write and you should be proud with the result. Great job.

Amen, Brandon. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write my friend. An appropriate story for Easter indeed. Amazing write with a powerful message. Appreciate you.

Damian

My draft I see AI couldn’t express so well my emotional thoughts.

I complain about you for the life
Which we are seeing now
When you care you also need to give

I complain about you that you are giving much fun than freaking life which you are of with

I complain now about you that your responsibility has risen with much sacrifice to give to make mom and dad to be a dad as like dad and mom care and sacrifice.

I do because you are wasting a dollar for every second and you are not saving a dollar every second.

I beg your pardon for seeing the life what we are going through I must say complaints to you about your self because we ended up with no control of mom and dad…..

Jessy Jacob ❤️

Nice write. I like the continuation of reasons that you stacked in the stanzas. It works well. Solid writing.