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    jaded

    my love doesn't understand your angerthat cuts me so preciselyas to free my sorrowleave me scarred and abandonedmy honest hope is I forgetbut the love I have for you won't relentit is rejected like cheap currencyit's not it's the...

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    • Crimson, your poem reads much of laden sadness and reluctance. Love sometimes becomes distorted and misrepresented in relationships when love, respect, integrity and honesty is not reciprocated.

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • I can sense a shattered emotional connection.

      Decaying miserably, upon disrepair.

      Healing is what matters the most going forward. x

      • hello lovely Rosie it’s true but sometimes there is no healing I’m schizophrenic and as such I have always accepted less than… thank you for the love on this write ❤️

    • thank you dearest Adagio for the love on this ❤️

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    Our Side

    What becomes of childrenWho grow up just to find A world where allTheir heroes let them down?Will they go blind just trying to seeThrough all the smoke and mirrorsRising from the ashes Of another burning town?How do you know...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brandon. Excellent write that really packs a hell of a punch my friend. This world is frustrating indeed. Nicely done. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Well, they will see only what they want. If you are not part of the equation, then you must be removed. this is something that is insightful and I appreciate that you did not lead the writer on what you meant it to be.

    • Brandon, this one hit’s hard in all the right ways. The questions linger, and the honesty carries. Worth a second read, as always with your work.

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    In The Dark

    Did you ever see your loneliness Or close down and take the painAfter every piece of hope was goneDid you give yourself the blameDid you start the fireOr just supply the sparkWas it hard to run In the dark? Did...

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    • Powerfully penned, Brandon. That’s an amazing write for anyone, makes it that much more impressive at 16 years old my friend. I still I have my first notebook as well, have never posted them though. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Damian,
      Beyond humbled by all your comments. Happy to be here!

    • You wrote this at 16? What a deep thought. What a wonderful beginning. Welcome to Stars Rite Brandon;)

    • Thank you! You made me smile this morning.

    • There’s a raw, searching honesty in this. you can feel the questions shaping the voice that would come later. The repetition of the dark works like a pulse, steady and human. A strong beginning, and you can already see the spark you kept.

      P.S. I’m so glad you broke out that notebook my friend.

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    Big Tech Small Hearts

    Big Tech is the biggest of thieves,Pinched our attention, then rolled up their sleeves.No thought for our minds or mental health,So long as the clickbait fattens their wealth.They care not for children, no matter the cost,Infinite scrolling on meaningless...

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