I love that you chose a positive message to write of. There is never enough of that. So thank you! And the write is well crafted, full of inspiring lines to lift the reader up. Great idea and great result, Fia.

Great thoughtful writing Fia.
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write with lots of deep layers my friend. Nicely done. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.

Damian

This does have a positive feel to it.
You never know, sometimes acknowledging someone who’s struggling could impact their day in a positive way.
One could only hope!

I think that too often people know it’s a mask, but they want to believe it’s reality. Because having to see what makes them uncomfortable is more than they’re willing to take on. So we paste on the smile and say we’re fine, and they eagerly choose to believe it so they don’t have to acknowledge the truth. I love that the message in this is to see beyond the surface

It is impressive how you end the sentence with a rhyme and it flows so smoothly. then ending it with “The bastards have to throw you to the wolves”
I enjoyed this

Powerfully penned, Brandon. Another excellent write that flows effortlessly my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

It’s like you’re damned if you do – damned if you don’t.
It’s got lots of energy plus wolves too!
Enjoyed the read!

It felt like a completion was not as satisfying as it should have been.

Passionately penned, Amethyste. Another excellent write full of layers and desire my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.

Damian

This is a different you, but i like it, just as much.

Phew! Glad to hear it! xx

I have so many thoughts on this one. I wish I didn’t feel this was our potential “future”…for however long it lasts. It gets uglier by the day. Not ready to give up yet though. Amazing writing! I was talking to Mary the other day and she said she just bought your latest book. 🙌