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Read MoreOn the 3rd,we all see a bird coming back homeas if it had been waitingfor April’s foolishness to calm downbefore daring to cross our skies again. It glides in with that effortless arroganceonly birds and very old truths possess,cutting a...
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Thanks for reading, comments and all.
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This is the second great piece I’ve read on here today…..perhaps it’s got something to do with a bunny.
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A very funny little bunny! Thank you.
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I love that hope is a bird. It has that feeling about it of flight. Beautifully written with wonderful imagery
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Thank you, my dear.
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Beautifully penned, PAR. Into the book it belongs! Excellent write with amazing storytelling that’s nestled in wisdom. Chef’s kiss my friend. Really love this one brother. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Life is a neverending storytelling, thanks Damian.
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Another flawless write my friend. Detailed, fragile & influential. Great work.
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Great, my friend, you are great.
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PAR (Paulo Acácio Ramos) posted in the group National Poetry Month
When the Bird Returns to Remind Us We’re Still Human
On the 3rd,
we all see a bird coming back home
as if it had been waiting
for April’s foolishness to calm down
before daring to cross our skies again.It glides in with that effortless arrogance
only birds and very old truths possess,
cutting a clean line through the blu…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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And, HOPE is the most dangerous thing of all!!
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It’s all in the details. The little nuances that leans elegantly one direction or the other. This one takes me places
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Thank you Willow. You are right its the nuances. <3
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Powerfully penned, Fia. Another excellent write my friend. It’s the minute details isn’t it? Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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This is a very reflective piece.
I can sense a lot of careful concentration from the writer.
I admire the determination throughout the stanzas.
This is a dark but incredible read. x
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
The Pitch
There is dark
And there is pitch
It’s funny how dark can feel comforting
And pitch is where the nightmares make a homeI see your silhouette in the dark
Envisioning warmth from lips
Sounds that roll like sweet butter toffee off the tongue
And I know there is only one thing left to doThen there is the pitch
Alone and n…Read More5 Comments-
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Very good .. but scary vibe too. Great work ….
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Thank you, Navina;)
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Of course 🤗
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Love it when you’re pitch dark, Fia. HJx
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Thank you Hjx
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![Profile picture of Damian DeadLove]()
Amen, Brandon.
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Thanks Damian!
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There’s a beautiful certainty in the way you wrote Grace. A presence that steadies, lifts, and stays. This piece moves with a kind of quiet strength.
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If Grace approves of Grace, then that makes my Friday! Thank you.
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![Profile picture of Willow]()
This feels almost like psalm or a benediction. Gently pointing out grace at every turn. Beautifully written
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Thank you Willow 🙂
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Wow.. Love this Par”that hope is ridiculous, fragile, winged and somehow always on time.