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Read MoreFirst time I got laid,I was fifteen.Kim.Black hair and big breasts.I just knew I was in love.She fucked every one of my friends.My heart felt like it was hit by a truck.I wandered lonelyas the neon night. I wanted to...
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Thank you.
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Powerfully penned, Thomas. The pain of a broken heart can often lead one into the arms of alcohol. It promises the world only to consume its host. Excellent write my friend, I can relate. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you, my friend.
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Those first moments of heartbreak are all consuming. I still remember mine like yesterday too…
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Yes, vivid and sharp. Thank you.
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Read MoreThe Mexicans hated when the Spaniards and French said, "you people"Native Americans learned to hate these very same wordsThe term was placed on a historic reel and ran like a sequelTwo innocent words placed together and wished that they...
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Read MoreYou are no more than Hecate controlling your three weird sistersBut I refuse to be your Macbeth, I'm so much more sinisterStep to the fire bitch and enter Paradise LostYou are drawn to my depths, willing to sacrifice at...
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I love how you take this darker than expected. Nicely done
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It is good to taste the darkness here and there, it’s delish Lady
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Read MoreMy love returned to me today,after two weeks absent,poked and prodded by other hands.Her slender neck realigned straight and true,action lifted smooth as a lover's curve,that infernal buzzing G-string silenced at last.She needed time away to reclaim her voice,and...
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Beautifully penned, Peter. Into the book it belongs! Nothing quite like the bond of a guitar player and their axe. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Tremendous. I can hear the chords now.
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You are so correct in comparing the guitar to a woman. Now, if I could just send my contrary wife off for a new set-up! Haven’t counted them lately, but I have over 20 acoustic guitars. Nice writing–I like it!
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Beautiful.
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Thanks for the like.
I could buy guitars just to admire them.
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Cleverly penned, Amethyste. Knowing you’re not alone and are understood is important and frightening all at the same time. Always enjoy reading your thoughts my friend. Excellent write. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Yes I agree with you it is important and frightening at the same time. You feel exposed. Thank you for reading it and for the support. I appreciate ir all.
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So true and spot on.
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Thank you Fia. A good day for you ahead.
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Aww its funny how one remembers their first time. This is well written