This is soo good, favorite line, “with the understanding the light shines so bright only because of the darkness”

hello dearest Damian thank you graciously please forgive my tardy responses on the other poems your on mind and I will catch up I appreciate you deeply ❤️

Amethyste, you said more in this short poem than many do with longer ones. This spoke to me tonight and I could feel it in my heart.

John

This form of poetry is so entrancing. “That some boundaries are crossed by desire.” Feel that.

There is so much power in this write!
Each line conjures such intense emotional pull. Like magnets colliding!
You’r waiting for an explosion 💥 that feels exquisite. You had me at the edge of my seat reading this. Hahah.
Phew, this was intense and filled with curiosity.
Loved everything about this and you!

The splendor of your poem filled me as I read with a rapturous yet softly and darkly wonder. I could see Pandora with her jar and the first tentative attraction unfolding until that jar of opened and the tempests come. But after the storm there is a truth in her being that is irresistible and compelling in the utmost. I could feel this in my heart and it was a truly splendorous read.

John

Thank you very much, Bat. This one took quite a bit of work!
How’s Gotham? 😉

Well what a hell of a comment, Brenda. Thanks for that. I’m trying to find subjects a bit unordinary. This one was a leap!

I am doing well, Damian. A recent trip to Texas (to see Del) was awesome.
Thank you for the supportive comment, too. This one took quite a bit of work, and hacking up the lines, for days. I’m trying to be interesting for the reader/s, so any encouraging words go a long way. Thank you.