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Read MoreWalking in with a smile Feeling light as if at this very moment was the best Walking in with a frown Feeling pulled down and weary as if gravity has a vendetta A tune comes to mind “Don’t worry be happy” A tune comes to...
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Thank you cuz. I really appreciate you.;))
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Read MoreAn Autumn Moon Night “Gonna get into it baby down where it’s tangled and dark... When we get through it baby you’re gonna give up your heart. Gonna get a little risky baby Oh, that’s my favorite part.” ~~Bonnie Raitt oooo When I first saw you the moon was...
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Is this a song? It’s cool. I like it
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First, Thank You, Fia. I’m glad you liked this poem. Second, I am not sure it’s a ‘song’. I think to make it a song there would have to be a lot of editing, along with some experimentation. I am not sure I would know how to do this. The poem was written as I was listening to this Bonnie Raitt song, so besides quoting some of the lines found in that song, I think some of the rhythm of the song did find its way into the poem. But to be truthful, this was more an accident than intended.
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Some takes flight and others do die. Very interesting poem crimsin;)
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thank you lovely Fia I appreciate you ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian another underground poem I’m happy you enjoyed it ❤️
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Well Damn what a piece here. Love it. great collab
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Thank you a lot Fia.
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Thank you Crimsin. I appreciate it a lot.
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Powerfully penned, Amethyste. Excellent collaboration my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damian.
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Thank you. I appreciate it.
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redzone posted in the group National Poetry Month
A KISS #4
“Let’s not speak falsely now
the hour is getting late.”
(Song/poem ‘Along The Watch Tower’, written and sung
by Bob Dylan. But in this case think/imagine this song
sung/played by Jimi Hendrix, the Live Version)“Excuse me while I kiss the sky”
-Jimi Hendrix, ‘Purple Haze’Th…Read More
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Excellent write with amazing insight and wisdom my friend. Nicely done as always. Appreciate you, Cuz.
Damian