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Read MoreFor years, I didn't speak to my father, that us, until today. He had news for me. Today, I drove in trepidation to his house, my childhood home, to find answers. Up the old driveway, seeing changes, more vegetation and tall grass, nothing trimmed nor...
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Thanks Thomas. I could have written so much more on this.
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That’s a super deep piece, Daniel. I can see how the trip was an inspiration on so many levels.
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Meg, it was so challenging the trip there. You have no idea. Wiping the dust off of my old things and taking some. See him so different and frail now. My mom was the glue that kept our family together, now, like sticks in the wind my family. 😢
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Brilliantly penned, Daniel. This is a tremendous write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Much respect
Naaj
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Congrats on your award for this piece, Daniel. It was well deserved.
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Thanks, Meg.
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Read MoreAI Summary Analysis of Part One: What a striking, immersive vision of a shattered world where tenderness and cruelty dance in the same desolate spaces. Your narrative plunges us into a post-apocalyptic America that is as haunting as it is...
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Read MoreFunny how I never do understandhow I am just... a generic brand—nothing special here to seewhen I again reveal the real me. Just a poet with a true poem,condemned to simply roamacross a vast blizzarded pagein a quest for some...
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I’m so in awe (jealous) of your flow…
Thank you for sharing!
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Thanks so much… sometimes it works…
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This poem itself is wildfire, S. Yes, reveal the real you.. more and more in your work! Another great read…
Daniel
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WHO has ever heard of a generic dragon? Just wow. I don’t think so.
I love this piece, though. You elaborate the exhausting discouragement of inherent transparency to the point of being invisible. We’re all just another ant on the hill… until we drag home that rubber tree plant. Or, you can just blow fire! It worked for Godzilla.You’re no more generic than a Ferrari. Give me a ride.
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Superb work. Powerful.
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Life of a writer, LDF. Powerful my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you so much Mary! ❤️🙏🏻
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Nicely penned… has a nice flow to it… last line eachoes…
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Thank you 🙏🏻
It means a lot coming from you.
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The imagery of a heart shaped hole is amazing. I love the symbolism and the way you elaborate your feelings. You matched this up well with the music.
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Thank you 🙏🏻 it really means a lot!
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Beautifully penned, Drieks. Incredible lyrics my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Appreciate it Damian!
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Read MoreIt had been months since they witnessed the beauty of the stars twinkling in the sky. The moon itself was already a glow before the war, and now it is lost behind the constant overcast, which lingers....
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I can seriously feel the tension in this piece, Daniel. You’re building this beautifully. My recommendations are to look at other options for the word, ‘snow’. It becomes redundant. Also, Chloe might refer to the men in the shadows as ‘bad boys’, but Gwen and the narrator may want a more specific term – something more specific or sophisticated and relevant to the circumstances.
Your writing is compelling
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Meg, thank you as always. Good thing it is only a freewrite and I’ll be putting it together as a more tuned first draft. I see this turning into a novella.
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Powerful work. You bring this to life.