you are very talented I enjoyed this very much you could be describing me here 💕this sounds like me..

You’re reaching depths I never expected. I think this applies to so many challenges we face. Really good!

Great piece here. Well written and executed.

Beautifully penned, Ben. Fantastic write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite! Appreciate you.

Damian

Some dope azz writing here!!
The pacing, the intellect and the message.
On point!!

Much respect

Naaj

hello Sam I don’t think anyone wants to be alone in the world I think anyway I can feel your heart here and it is beautiful 💕

Wait…
You’re saying a woman shut the door in your face and now you’re all alone?
Fucking hell, Sam. I thought you were peeing against that wall. What a relief.
Get your ass over here. She didn’t deserve you anyway.

The door is open…
as is anything else you’d like

Sam. not acceptable. Walk away from the door. You need redirection.
Good grief you are not allowed to be alone.

Go to Dk first, I am too mad at the door shut in your face. (good poem)

Powerfully penned, Sam. No one wants to be alone my friend. I can relate. Appreciate you.

Damian

There’s no aphrodisiac like loneliness
Truth beauty and a picture of you.

Lyric from The Whitlams….great song .

Loneliness is deadly. Get out there, make friends with woman and have a blast in life. Life is way to short! Great write Sam.

hello lovely Fia this is beautiful and so serene 💕

You are making my petals open from way over here. Just imagine my aroma as an arrangement on your table. You took the words right out of my mouth… LAY ME

Beautifully penned, Fia. Into the book it belongs! A lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Sounds very blissful. Nothing like a day of bliss. Great ink.

Enjoyed this.

A lovely, delicate piece. Well done Fia.

I really like this. Feels like classic poetry. Warm and nostalgic. Very nice, Fia

Naaj

Love the way you write Fia, enjoyed this read..