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Read MoreGhetto Lions Her lover man, drunk on romance,is led by her down skid row.He is a sad-eyed prophet of gloomwho topples imaginary kingdomsin his game of emotional chess.He never quite captures the king. He hugs her, his angel of midnight dreams.His...
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Damian, I am most grateful for your seeing into the layers within this piece. And also very grateful for your appreciation of the imagery and storytelling in my poem. I appreciate you too, very much.
John
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Tremendous work. Powerful and vivid. Excellent.
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Thank you so much Thomas. Very much appreciated your observations on my poem. Very grateful.
John
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This is so worth reading. The grittiness and inner searching, as well as a lonely desire dresses this up nice. I get a real California children of the night feel to this. So well done. Great poem.
Did you mean as he combs her golden tresses?
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Thank you so much Tim. You did see into the heart of my poem with a keen insight into its meaning. Love your words here. You have brought joy into my night. And yes I did indeed meaning he combs. Thank you so much for pointing that out. You really helped a lot with that. Have a great night.
John
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Read MoreI haven't walked away though it feels like I should, you broke my trust in quiet ways no apology could, you call it harmless but my heart knows pain, you act like nothing happened, but I cry when no...
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Powerfully penned, Lora. It’s almost like a spiritual tug of war that you’re describing. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Love hurts 4 sure
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hello beautiful Lora it hurts me to know you are suffering and I can’t make it better… I’ve been through quite a lot with my man too and know no one can take that pain from you or replace that person in your mind hugs 💕
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You b n u makes it better thanks for b n there 4 me
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Read MoreLying lonely in this grave... It's too late, my soul to save... For Ravens flock and fly around... Just to hear my lonely sounds... Claustrophobic in the ground... Darkness clothes me all around... Many souls do lurk above... The ones who didn't praise God enough... But why...
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Powerfully penned, SW. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You made my day. If there were more people like you.
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That is funny. 😀
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You too have a spectacular day. Yes it is true.
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Read MoreHis body like a tree it towers... Arms like branches do devour... Im safe all nestled close inside... By his body I doth hide... His body like a flame in fire... It's warm, its hot, I do desire... His touch, his warmth, his fire... All his...
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Poem of devotion to your husband beautiful.
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Lovely for you to share your words with us…..lucky husband.
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Beautifully penned, SW. This is a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Intriguing write, John. This piece has layers and lots of depth my friend. Amazing imagery and storytelling. Appreciate you.
Damian