Started off intense then stopped. that is how some relationships go. nice Daniel

First, I love the Esthetics of this piece. You really make the reader focus. The first line was on point. I enjoyed this.

Movement is EVERYTHING. And you certainly hit your stride in this piece. Too often seem to wanna wait on a “sign” before they’ll get off their asses & do something. If the thought whispers in the mind…move on it. That’s why it’s there.

Truth runs through everything – or should for Life’s sake! The ‘do unto others as..’ in any faith is the truth of existance, without it – all’s lost. Perhaps that explains the reason for our planet gradually fading into space even unreachable via Man’s ability. Maybe Al will win the contest – when it’s truthful enough to say how and – able. Fine writing, also a fine claim to fame by, perhaps, starting a debate

Love the flow and the T.R.U.T.H. in this. Must have missed seeing this one on the board when I was here the last few times. But that’s just like the truth….you have to go looking for it. Magickal as they are, we can’t depend or even subsist on thought & word alone. Actions…passions…are what makes it an earthly reality. It’s like the old truther meme says…”the world is not real yet everything you do matters”

Keeping this one.

Big thx, lady. I always appreciate your depth of insight.
And I’m also enjoy hearing about your shower escapades 🙂

Folded into quiet rooms..that got me. then you said you remember the moment you turned your heart away. That is pain