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Read MoreI long to be a caveman,at least for just a day.To crawl out of my stinking cave every morning and enjoy a cavemans breakfast 'a piss and a good look round'.I long to be a caveman, at least for...
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What I write! And done on the toilet! Lol
This is quite the masterpiece. I enjoyed all the back and forth. Like reading a tennis match.
Caveman vs the 21st century.
Well done!Loved the ending!
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Thank you Adelphina….toilet poetry isn’t always bad…. lol
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I am somewhat jealous; my toilet poetry is usually flushed because of the brown streaks. You write of the ying and yang of individualism, the brown streaks versus what once was. We humans have lost touch with our origins. We once made cave art, danced and howled at the moon; where it was women who ruled the campfires. And in some ways, we were more intelligent than we are today. We could talk to animals and create myths about the formations in stars. We will never get back to this, but I do think we can create a society where we once again talk to animals and reach for the stars.
Your poem is thought-provoking and appreciated. Thanks for the share.
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Thanks Curt for your comment.
I’m going to the bathroom soon to think about Opposites.
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Emma, this is a well narrated story of the history of your writer’s life where college took you. This glimpse into the past was quite stimulating to read. I loved how the life events unfolded and reading this story that felt like an entry for a memoir.
John
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Many thanks, you found the thread running through time and kindly accepted the truth of my words. There is a future to come but with pauses for self reflection. More than that, I don’t know yet! Patience or adventure!?
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I just found this… Oh! You write, such indigo between lines.
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weirdly, this reminds me of someone that i used to love, from afar.
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Read MoreUpon the sharpest Hook moon of fright Answering the call Of a newborn nightSummoning inside this Rusted metal shed Surrounded by misted Red air of dread Remnants of lovers From who I...
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Yes..vampires, werewolves and the goes bump on hollioween..
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Thanks Fia! I wanted it to sound almost like a lullaby. lol
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Hello, can I interest you in a Frankenstein type guy? LOL.
I love when you get all voracious! This is a dare ya write, you know!
Okay okay. Enchanting write, Vampira! I love the aggressiveness of it, the baring of fangs and display of an appetite for human consumption…
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I was in the mood after reading all the fun stuff
And you are just my type mister. Perfect. 😍
I’m glad I enchanted you with my fangs!
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Beautifully penned, Adel. Excellent Halloween write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you Damien!
I enjoy fantasy horror.
I love Van Helsing! The one with Hugh Jackman.
And The Mummy with Brendon Fraser.Thanks for checking this out amigo!
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Nice and spooky for the Halloween season. 🙂
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Tis the season Tim!
Now I need a huge bag of Snickers and Twix! HahahaLater gator!
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Even though I am not a huge fan of Halloween, this is pretty cool .. in fact it’s bloody much better than that .. Neville 🐈⬛🖤🐧😎👍
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Nev, amigo!
When I think of Halloween I remember getting on the tailgate of my dad’s truck with my friends to go trick or treating.
Some of my best memories. We would do each other’s makeup and have a blast. lol
There are a few neighborhoods in my hometown that still go all. People will park a block away and walk with their kids up and down the neighborhood.I’m glad you enjoyed the write! Now go take advantage of all the awesome chocolate varieties on Halloween 🎃
Snickers & Twix! Even the Reese’s peanut butter cups are cool:)-
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You can beat an egg and a drum but you can’t beat a Twix can ya eh’ 😎👍
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Oh! This is good.
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![Profile picture of Adelphina]()
Thank you!
I wanted it to sound like a dark tale from Disney. lol
Hope that made sense!
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Tis the season for the undead. Great ink.
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Thank you! It was fun to write!
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An interesting write, suitable for the season.
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Well hello there Mr. FlatDaddy!
I wrote this around three years ago. I was in a vampy witchy mood. lol
Thanks for stopping by amigo!
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Read MoreI am Me, a vampiri of the Nosferatu orderWe are a symbiotic being, needing a host to fill our ordersWe crawled up through the bowels of hell into this cavePreying upon bats, wolves, and anything living in order to...
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This is giving me all the October feels. Love the vampire creating Vladimir. Love it;))
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We love the smell of fresh turnt soil, it’s yummy. We try to stay away from the dark pieces although they are truly easier. But they place us in a very dark place and we still have to deal. Thanks Lady
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Yes wen we met you didn’t like darkness, but true light contains all. You over came an obstacle opening numerous doors within self. Thanks Lady for being there
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Read MoreShe was beaten into a crumpled pile, he never feared as he approachedThere was the smell of tortorus pain all around, the walls of realm broached Lost in the wilderness of her mind, where her abuser left her for...
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Ooo this is dark. The beast is going to protect her from a beast That is going to be an epic fight. Nice
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At times humans are the worst of predator, check the stats of missing females of various ages every year. We see movies and literature in various parts ordinary life. Thanks a ton Lady
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Quite a write! Quite an accomplishment, too. It was well thought out with detail. It’s intriguing throughout too. I’m sure it was quite a task to take on, but you succeeded. Awesome write.
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Dude, you don’t know tis but we read you. We commented though not frequently on you pieces on DUP, You’re a Mountain or Pyramid acknowledging a mole hill. Both you and your Lady are and have dropped some serious gems, Thank you
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Understand that I am a lot of a product of what I read.
Your style is unique, interesting. It comes from angles no one else sees. Individual talent is impossible to throw into any category. Yours is prime material just as much as mine will ever be.
I am glad that there is so much diverse writers in here, like on DUP. It’s how we grow in new directions, etc.
I feed off others more than you know. Every pillar holds up the bridge, dude. You’ve earned yours long ago.-
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RESPECT DUDE
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Of course it’s that time of year, but we’re tryin to revisit this space and create something Halloween special. Thank you Lady for all o your support for sure
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Loved this werewolf mini movie.
While reading I was watching it in my mind in black and white!
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But still waiting on more from you guys actually this is our time of year to be self. Thank Lady
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