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Read MoreIn a wood where heather grows high and wide,And the moon on the bracken makes silver tide,A mortal walked where none dare stray—And met a maid from the Aos Sí that day. Her hair was woven of alder bark,And her...
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Thanks Tim! I usually just write random lines and thoughts, but this one took a quite a few days of careful crafting (and a lot of RhymeZone help, haha.)
I agree about AI poems… I think I’m getting pretty good at spotting them, that they have certain markers that repeat again and again. My former poetry site seemed overrun with them over the last year or so.
I appreciate the kind words, and that you like these oldy-timey sounding ones as I do!
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Powerfully penned, ST. Excellent write with amazing storytelling my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Thank you! I always feel trepidatious with these rhyme and tight rhythm-schemed poems, that they’ll sound too contrived, or lose the emotion in the crafting. Thank you so much for reading, and, again, for your always overly generous comments!!
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Read More(Aŋpétu Wičhákhiye šni él He Sápa Kȟaŋǧí Kíŋ Ičháǧe)Hau! Hear now the voice of Ptesáŋwiŋ, as I have never told the story of a romantic love before, but this love was such that it even brought tears to these...
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Read Moreone night it shall comewhen all in the world choosesto go to sleep and dream togetherall at just exactly the very same time(for this has never happened before)that when upon your awakeningsall that you all want most in lifewill...
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Powerfully penned, ST. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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You are so very generous and kind with your comments. I appreciate you!!
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Read MoreListening to blues fats baritonesAnd sassy saxNeath the chestnut moon Scrunching out notesWith sloe gin and quinine And bitter lemon's Serendipitous pulp rind In Sunday's massAbove the fault line, disownedAngels burned their shoesMelting communion waxAnd plastic churchesTheir wings slipped...
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hello beautiful Adelphina and Adagio this is a divine masterpiece ❤️
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Thank you Crimsin:)
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Thank you, Styx.
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Thanks for the collaboration! I enjoyed.
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We did good, Adel
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Hey Brenda! We thank you. I must admit that Adel improved it. I was stuck, and she came to my rescue.
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well I really think it’s special you two collaborate beautifully together bringing out a divine essence ❤️
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At the moment, I’m touched by a taco and tea,
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I didn’t count syllables but each line flowed flawlessly. You have a talent for rhyme, that’s for sure. I wrote something similar years ago about Brier Rose but it didn’t go over well. I think people are suspicious of rhyming poems these days with the advent of A.I.
I hope you get more comments. Great writing.