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Read MorePlastic Jesus The Lethe magic of a blue spandex swirl of bicycle shorts Clothes...
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While perusing past comments on some of my works, I saw yours on my piece, “Road Trip,” and thought I needed to get to know you. I moved to the first piece you posted since most of us want to start strong, and boy was I right. This is outstanding, John, and I wish more people could see it. A killer piece, for sure.
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Hey there, sorry I am just getting to read this wonderful comment on my poem. I was out of town for a couple of weeks. Indeed this is one of my most explosive poems. Very glad you enjoyed it. Thanks so much for visiting this piece. Really means the world to me.
John
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Read MoreDarkness Falls Haikus #1 Under sun's shadow I dissolve into ashes.Silent, dark embrace. #2 Time drags its cruel weight. Echoes scream in empty skies. Atoms beg release. #3 Bright flames devour all. An abyss beneath the fire. Forgotten remains. #4 The angel descends. Final trumpet rends the sky....
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I like how you give us 6 in one. The Angel Descends. Very powerful.
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Thanks for liking my words.
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I am happy to be here.
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Beautifully penned, PAR. Glad to see you here, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Fantastic Damian!
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Greetings PAR. Sinister piece my friend. I love the darkness you’ve layered all over this poem. Wicked!
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Thanks for your always constructive comments. Appreciate you!
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Thanks for your always constructive comments. Appreciate you!
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Thank you! 🌻
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Thank you so much, my friend. Glad this left a strong impression with you. 🙂
John