Darkness Falls
Haikus
#1
Under sun’s shadow
I dissolve into ashes.
Silent, dark embrace.
#2
Time drags its cruel weight.
Echoes scream in empty skies.
Atoms beg release.
#3
Bright flames devour all.
An abyss beneath the fire.
Forgotten remains.
#4
The angel descends.
Final trumpet rends the sky.
Boundaries collapse.
#5
I burn, lost to light.
The sun within consumes me.
Eternal despair.
#6
Dark clarion calls.
In the void I find my end.
A garden of pain.







I like how you give us 6 in one. The Angel Descends. Very powerful.
Thanks for liking my words.
I love a good story in haiku.
This is superb PAR.
And that last line…impactful.
So glad you’re here!
I am happy to be here.
We’re pleased to have you here 🙂
Beautifully penned, PAR. Glad to see you here, my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
Fantastic Damian!
Greetings PAR. Sinister piece my friend. I love the darkness you’ve layered all over this poem. Wicked!
Thanks for your always constructive comments. Appreciate you!
Thanks for your always constructive comments. Appreciate you!
This is gorgeous in its darkness. You’re very talented. I dig a study in haiku.
Thank you! 🌻
You’re welcome