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Read MoreDown in the dark depths of the earthDown where hurt and despair liesTorrential rain storms and earthquakesRelentless fires in the skiesWhere can I turn for comfort?Who will help me in my despairI help everyone with my brand of comfortI...
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Haha I will if she returns to me.
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Thank you so much Timmy appreciate it;))
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This is wonderful. Let’s take a walk there. Cool write.
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Thank you. I need to take a walk there.
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Thank you, Angel. I do not know who the woman was by the lake. I closed my eyes and that’s what happened. I’m glad that it touched you and made you think of the Beatles; that’s cool.
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Thank you, Adira—blessings to you.
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Read MoreDon’t know where these roads lead Some closed others off the beaten path Mile after mile paved in endless greed Dirty deeds exposed after the bloodbath So many moving parts in this machine Places to hide and manipulate from Having paid to wipe the system...
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Powerful. I does feel as if we are being swarmed at the moment.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. It does feel that way, indeed. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Pressures are always around Damian. This poem solidifies the true meaning of “Big brother is watching” Great job here.
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write, my friend. Always watching. Appreciate you.
Damian
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It sure is a bloomin jungle out there isn’t it .. inkredibly well captured if not tamed .. Neville 😎👍
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Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Neville. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I try.. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Has anyone figured out how to edit on this site? There’s a change I want to make.
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Please go to the dashboard. There is a pen. Click on it and you can edit your work.
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Thanks!
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You’re welcome;))
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Awesome write. Dreams and nightmares are our warped realities.
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Thank you. I just updated it, so it’s a little different now.
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Yes, you understand what I was saying. Thank you.
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Exactly, Indie. Thank you.
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Love this entreaty poem. Indeed we seek a way out of the darkness and it often helps to have a helping hand from someone we can trust. Truly a beautiful nocturne poem that resonated in the chambers of my soul.
John
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Thank you so much John. I’m glad it reached you, and I appreciate being understood.
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Love the ending of this, and I love the succinct texture. You add depth as you go until the whole piece becomes a metaphorical journey. I like where you take this.
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