Beautifully penned, Brenda. A very lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

This poem is a vivid, honest look at desire – full of passion but also quiet vulnerability. The contrast between the “neon God” and “bluebirds” is striking and memorable.

I feel these words. They are otherworldly, uttered from another world beyond the one we inhabit.
Kind regards
James

Spooky and spellbinding, crimsin. I like it. You capture the magic within the spell. 🙂

First line fifth stanza, did you mean “summon”?
This was fascinating…and as Tim said…very spooky.
I love the idea of “stalking my vision”!
j.

Powerful work. You nailed it.

Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

crimson, this is sweet. I understand how you feel

Beautifully penned, Brenda. They’re amazing like that, a lovely write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Wonderfully written. I could feel the warmth of the fire!

Fantastic!

You always put the perfect image with your poems. Love this.

Powerful work. Superb.

Passionately penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian