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Read Moredwindles the eve as the day dies shortwinter weeps for no oneshiver in its cold embracecynical fact sarcastic lamentthere are few things I like lessthen a grey unforgiving daytormented wonder my delusions of granduerseeking the Gods of yesterdayto amuse...
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good evening dearest Styxian thank you graciously these are just feelings and fears I try to always write in a current mindset I’m happy it worked for you have a beautiful Evening ❤️
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Oh! This is good, Brenda. Right up my alley.
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hello dearest Adagio thank you graciously it’s so funny to me it happens to us a lot and I swear I didn’t even peak at your poem till after ❤️have a great day…
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sometimes, even the sun cannot help when a “cynical fact sarcastic lament” is involved, but becomes magnified when the day is grey. and sometimes there are only vague answers to our ceaseless whys, and yet we cannot help but ask for them. Ironic isn’t it? we are born, we live, we die, and in between these events, there is only the moment and what we do with each one of them. Did we only exist? Or did we make a difference?
Thanks for your poem, Crimsin. I enjoyed reading it and where it led me.
Curt
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read Moredeep I go and deeper stillcultivating sadness it shines inside of me why deny itsweet melancholy serenades in the shadowsquietly I play my melodymetiqulously I climb the notes into my black dintheir is cackling accompanied by whispersthe horde reside...
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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hello dearest Damian thank you graciously ❤️
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Thia is a deeply moving poem, Crimsin. I felt especially those last 3 line. And the music made the poem more real to me, more tragic. To desire death, yet condemned to life, where only sadness can be found. And yet, there is also the deeply felt desire to be “understood”. Crimsin, you may not want anyone in your “onyx tower”, but your poem calls to us nonetheless. Is this not an invitation to at least feel your words?
You write powerfully, Crimsin.
Curt
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hello dearest Curt of course it is I hope to move always that you got it makes me happy thank you ❤️
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Read Moresadden refrain I've done it againacting more like a goat then a sheepit's not my fault I get confused at the true nature of Godone point of contention is why were these secrets of heaven so damningthe fallen angels...
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I fall for your poetry every time Brenda. Love the wording and atmosphere. Great image too. xox
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good morning dearest Keith thank you for the love on this I wish I had answers definitive ones ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Incredible write my friend. Appreciate you.
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thank you graciously dearest Damian have a great night ❤️
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Read Moreon syths and dark artistryvenom spilled and harlotryit is mystics gift to feel everything as the night deepens and dark descendsmy soul wanders my life to defendlooking at ghouls and madmenundefined creatures of the horde sanity kept deep withinmy sanctuary is...
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Happy Halloween, this is so good. I like how you were telling us now to whisper to demon kind because it is obscene.
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hello beautiful Fia thank you for the love on this… tis the spirit of the season ❤️
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Hauntingly penned, Brenda. That’s a Halloween story my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you graciously dearest Damian I appreciate you ❤️
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Read Morestir the spirit's mists then callit is callously you announce yourselftender of spirit I tune you outbreathing down my back thinking I won't bitecivility is for those civilhunted grace, I am guardedmortal grin then spityou're at war with yourself...
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Chère C.,
A friend of mine wished me a blessed Friday.
I’ve come to absorb your words, art work and waive half of her well wishes to you…Kind regards, Gus
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thank you from you both dearest Gus and friend ❤️
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On second thoughts:
The compass points North.
We call that orientation, but the orient is in the east.
If I look west, there’s the North Sea
So it’s only natural for me to look south, now and again. And again.I Love this…
Your poem makes me wonder…
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thank you dearest Gus I appreciate you and your curiousity ❤️
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Classy and scary. Such great craft from you. 🙂
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thank you graciously dearest Jim ❤️
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Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent dark write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thank you dearest Damian for showing me love on even my blackened offerings ❤️
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well this is quite grand. It’s like you were fighting the urge of feeling overwhelmed. So you wrote out an incantation to ward off the bad spirits? You slayed it!
Really interesting write, Crims. Very much so.