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    a maddening sorrow prevails when all else failssorrow stirred can't be deniedit fills my inner chambersflooding me with the feelingof never was love, for him anywaymy soul cannot reconcile the emotion, with the hurtmy worry, it will not ever...

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    • Chère C.,
      As in:
      I see small lines in your face.
      They are beautiful.
      I had to wait an awful long time for them.
      And now they are Here, I won’t let you go…
      And I would cup your face in my hands.
      Yes, something like this, for sure.
      Warm regards, Gus

    • Great write but not as great as the picture of a beautiful woman.I don’t know if it’s you in the picture or not but there is something seriously attractive about her.
      It’s beauty that goes deeper than skin,wisdom that goes deeper than words,scar tissue that colours the soul.
      🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

      • hello dearest Benny no it is not me just an example of a beautiful older lady…lines and all my feelings got hurt that’s what this write was about I think people should take in all of you to see your beauty… not just the superficial…thank you for the love here ❤️

    • A deep, heartfelt poem Brenda. Well said..xo

    • Powerfully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Age has been a humbling experience for me. lol. Appreciate you.

      Damian

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    harlot

    dour were the notes I climb to youilliciting dismay I felt disparagedmy bosom heave and I exhale my disdainmy advances rebuffed I was left smitten with no way to rectifyunseeing lust, was covetoussomething happened to me when you let...

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    • Passionately penned, Brenda. Love the layers in this powerful write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • thank you graciously dearest Damian I was listening to a song called Lilith by Peter Grundy when I wrote this ❤️

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    honesty

    delicate is the visiongentle is the waydeep within me I am summonedonce again to your throne roomsacred eyes behold the lady in crimson hair wild and blondeeyes wide and observinguntil I see youWisdom, in all your glorymy heart softens...

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    kiss

    twisted feelings, ghost of lightbleeding thoughts of me and youHorror's need, the fiend in me stirreddarkness dare to face yousilent plea, don't turn from me in my hour of neednaked rebellion, my bare truths coming to you openlya sacred...

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    • Beautifully penned, Brenda. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.

      Damian

      • hello dearest Damian thank you graciously I take that as a high honor coming from you a gifted writer ❤️

    • Chère C.,
      You tag it love.
      And that’s what I wish for you.
      Heaps and heaps of love.
      Warm regards, Gus

      • hello dearest Gus this is a song I like and I think it correct about love thank you my friend ❤️

        • Chère C.,
          Love your write and your choice of music.
          This is 12 years old and I didn’t know it, so I’m really glad you suggested it.

          This is so close to my music, that it gives me the courage to ask if i can put one of your poems to music one day.
          Please don’t be scared. I’ll do nothing without your full OK. OK?
          Have a wonderful thursday!
          Warm regards, Gus

          • I would love that dearest Gus I would be deeply honored ❤️

            • Hoi hoi
              I’d be deeply honored if you would like the results.
              Have a nice weekend!
              Warm regards, Gus

    • Stirring the cauldron with a naked glue that sticks to the dark.

      Atticus Abbey

      • hello dearest Adagio thank you graciously for a wonderfully poetic comment ❤️

    • You are very welcome.

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    hollow

    masturbated sadness, waves of sorrow coming without youit is bittersweet happiness in the momentthen a deep ache when I realize my hollow places remain pleadingpenetrating need, is me craving youunadulterated desire to feed upon your fleshcoveted touch, my passion...

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