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    Demanding

    Style means nothing without substance  That’s something money can’t buy Walking through the world in a trance Long enough to embrace living this lie   Social outcast learns how to survive  Turning loneliness into independence  Wanting to avoid the impending nosedive Sometimes caution means ride the fence   Timid...

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    • When I read your musing, a quote of Friedrich Nietzsche was the first thought that came to my mind: “You must have chaos inside to give birth to a dancing star. “It’s exactly the chaos, the self doubts, the questions upon questions, the deep reflections at night which give birth to a dancing star of inspirations writings and deep thoughts. Great work, dear Damian!

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Elke. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support. Appreciate you.

    • This is a good piece of musing, Damian.
      This is so true
      “Timid people constantly read the room

      While they study the human psyche “

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Fia. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Loved those lines as well. Appreciate you, cuz.

        Damian

    • Amazing piece Damian. Thank you for sharing 🙏

    • I think it all comes from being wounded too many times. I identify with this very much.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Tim. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I agree with you, that has a good deal to do with it. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Wonderfully written Damian. Well said. Keep up the great poetry my friend.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Keith. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Thank you for your continued support my brother. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Dude, I’m not timid at all and yet I still read a room! I am extremely observant of my surroundings. It’s a crazy world yaknow!
      Your write is a crowd of personalities, interesting in each of their ways. The rhyme makes it flow really well. It’s carrying a beat all its own. Well versed Damian.

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mark. So glad you connected with the write my friend. It is a crazy world, reading the room is always required. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • hello dearest Damian this is excellent I can relate to the searching and lonliness of not being satisfied with pat answers ❤️

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Brenda. So glad you connected with the write my friend. I know exactly what you mean. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • It takes so many approaches and responses to survive these days. And not the least of which is temporary retreat and regroup. How do your pieces always seem so relevant to every moment? Prophet, I’m telling you. Keep assembling the pieces of the puzzle, my friend

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Willow. So glad you connected with the write my friend. These days reading the room and critical thinking are required to survive it seems. I will always be piecing together the puzzle, it’s what I do. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • There’s a real honesty here in the way you weave survival, wisdom, and self‑doubt into one puzzle feels deeply human. The closing admission about chaos being “demanding” hit especially true.🙏🏻🕊️

      • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, kesnerfreds. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Welcome to Stars Rite. Appreciate you.

        Damian

    • Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. One of my favorite stanzas as well. Thank you for your continued support my friend, right back at ya. Appreciate you.

      Damian

    • Reminds me of the matrix with the red and blue pill. Either face reality or live in fantasy.

      Great ink friend.

    • Damian you formed this into a great poem of rumination. Very much loved the way this unfolded. So much wisdom in your words. Truly great poem my friend.

      John

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    • Hi, TFT! I welcome you to “BACK TO POETRY BASICS”, and would like to invite you to join-in on our Sonnet lesson (two posts below). It’s easy: just read and follow along. I look forward to sharing with you. ⁓ Richard🖌

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    No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
    What had happened on the roof

    Time withholds memories in a box
    We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
    As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
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