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Fia Naturie posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
Okay, I am stuck with this, but I am trying.
Was born with eyes wide open
To be prepared for the truth
No one seemed to care or wanted to offend
What had happened on the roofTime withholds memories in a box
We crawl, then stand, and eventually walk
As a rusty key enters an unforgiving lock
Uttering words before learning to talk6 Comments-
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I am going to. By next week it should be better.
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I hope so … the topic is very interesting, if you can get it into proper Sonnet format. : )
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I’m trying
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For examples, you might read and study some of my posted sonnets, applying what you’ve learned from the lesson to become a bit more familiar with the Sonnet format … you should have it down by next week’s session. It doesn’t have to be perfect, just show a basic understanding we can build on.
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okay
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Read Morecolor me in shades of greystreaks of blacksblues that pulse in dyin veinstiny specks of glowin whitespretendin to be stars take the color from my eyeslet them melt outa their socketsvision drippin down my cheeksa man made of moonless nightsin...
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Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Read MoreThis Wednesday with be the first of a series of classes in the Back-to-Basics group. The first class is on sonnets.This is for those who want to learn how to write one and for those who already written one...
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Thanks for the info, Fia. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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interestin
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Fia, you really need to study the lesson more thoroughly for a complete understanding.