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Read Moreit doesn’t matter how I movehis eyes are lockedclocking how I walktracking each shift of my hipswatching my legs cross when I sithe sees...everythinghe's got that x-ray vision if there's one thing I've learned...I tell myself this...girl, just do what...
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Interesting you use the word sass…my nickname as a child was Sassy. Guess it never faded. Thank you, my friend 😊
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WHOA!!! Willow, this is 100% passionate, sensual… sexy!!
Love this line: “fire infused and filled with intention”. I swear, as I read this line, I could feel Heat spreading out from the computer screen and melted my keyboard. WTH, now I have bandaged fingertips…😎 now where did I put that fire extinguisher??!! Loved the music and singing.. I give it 100 snaps, 10 Hell Yeses, and sway the hips danceable!Curt
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Well damn! That’s a lot! Much appreciated! I don’t have a fire extinguisher but Volupta routinely had me hitting the cold shower with her erotica. So I get it! Thank you, Curt 😊
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I read this without the music, then listened to it. Both ways show the heat you were trying to convey. I love the part where you say he loves your mind. It’s a potent thing.
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According to him, my body is banging but without my mind, it’s just anatomy. He never leaves me questioning my value in the space of us. Thank you, Fia 😊
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A great piece of dedication and spiciness, tight one Lady
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Thank you! He brings out the spicy in me 😊
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Full of passion and power. Tremendous work.
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Thank you, Thomas 😊
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Brilliant work. Powerful.
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Thank you 😊
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Read Morereality is this...I don't require your permission...just to existso keep your indulgence to be who I am validation isn't yours to give...yes...it's a gift...but it comes...from within oh shit...by your own rules...did I just invalidate you?oops
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oh well shit happens 🙂
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It does indeed 😂
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Invalidation, reeks in every corner…well said, Willow.
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Truth. Thank you, Adagio
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I feel that after, “Validate this…” there should be, “…MF” 🙂
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I thought about the middle finger emoji but decided to leave it open 😂
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Powerfully penned, Willow. Excellent write my friend. This one goes for the jugular. Appreciate you.
Damian
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Not one of us validates another. We only have the power to validate ourselves. Unfortunately, many of us forget it comes from inside. I had a powerful reminder of this recently. Thank you, my friend
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Fantastic work, Willow.
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Thank you, Thomas
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I feel like snapping my fingers to this. Yes, yes
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Go for it! Get a good rhythm going and maybe we’ll get a crowd involved. 😂 Thank you, Fia
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Read MoreIn the sea of blue-green glass The cracks and slivers are camouflaged Beauty entices and invites you to touch Unaware minute cuts into unsuspecting skin When eyes focus You see the warped and corrupted shards Lessons learned and ingrained into the subconscious As blood drips and...
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I see this as someone discovering the blue green glass for the first time. Interesting poem, Fia.
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Thank you, Tim;))
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I see it as a discovering of the truth about someone close.
It’s a great write however I interpret it.🙏-
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Thank you, Peter;))
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Beautifully penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I love your musings. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you, Damian;))
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good morning lovely Fia this went from beautiful to dark carried out by the frothing sea so poignant ❤️
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Thank you, crimsin 🩷
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Beauty brought fore by abrasion.
An important truth of nature I believe.-
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Yes it is. Thank you, Jim;))
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Chère F.,
Pollution in its mildest form.
An environmental poem in disguise.
See? That’s the fun of it. To write something small and everyone had his/her own ideas about it.
Pure genius, no matter how you look at it.Keep ‘em coming please…..
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Thank you, Gus (I will try to keep going:) )
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Excellent analogy…beauty often disguises danger for the unwary
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Thank you, Willow;))
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Very mysterious and philosophical.
Regards JamesI love the way glass goes from sharp and dangerous to soft and smooth with the passing tides
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Thank you, James;))
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Read MoreI stumble thru a world that’s bent slightly outa focusas if it were half dreamhalf burnheat risin off my skin in waveslike quiet embers tryinto decide if I’m worth ignitin every breath feels wrongevery step lands heavygravity clawin up my...
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“my hands return first
those traitor creators of sound
those makers of chords and noise
now tremblin like loose strings”Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write with killer imagery my friend. Loved the lines above, and that ending verse drove it home. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
Damian
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much appreciated Damian
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“proof that anythin divine
never leaves
without takin somethin with it”Shit that hits hard with fact
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yep. it’s the damn truth
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Sheer brilliance, Syr 253👌
You’ve mastered the heartbeat techniques of Free Verse poetry: Imagery, deeply gripping emotion, metaphor, seamless enjambment, syntax; and, except for the distraction of missing “g’s”, your diction and spellbinding flow would be irresistibly captivating to the senses.
“my knees crack
my heart misfires
and my body folds inward
as the light drains out
leavin a thin line of heat
hidin under my ribs
proof that anythin divine
never leaves
without takin somethin with it”Phew, Poet! Now, that’s how a pen’s supposed to dance….
Perfect title, too.Good stuff, I’ve said enough … except, a grateful “Thanks!” ⁓ Richard🖌
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much appreciated. glad ya liked the title. I was bouncin back and forth between two.
won’t be addin the Gs in tho. I understand why it’s asked of me but…let’s call it my “poetic voice”. it’s how I speak. it’s not carelessness…it’s cadence. it’s rhythm. it’s intentionally informal. keeps my poetry movin. walking feels like a chore…performin a task. walkin feels like motion. and I get where you’re comin from. it’s sloppy. it’s unpolished. looks lazy as fuck. but that’s the point. it’s meant to move. it’s meant to feel lived in. meant to read like it’s spillin out faster than you can take a breath. it’s meant to trip and scrape and bleed. it’s meant to be messy and alive. it’s meant to be human. it’s meant to be me.
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Well,
I think you might be able to imagine how us English Lit Grads/Poetry Teacher types are in our heads, eh?
Anally blessed (or, cursed) … LOL!Sincerely, I love your uniquely original brand of 253 poetry. 👍
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lol yes…completely understandable. I consider myself a bit of a non practicin intellectual
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twofiftythree posted in the group ”BACK TO POETRY BASICS”
for sake of the lesson I added punctuation…don’t get attached.
gravity slip
I stumble thru a world
that’s bent slightly outa focus
as if it were half dream,
half burn.
heat risin off my skin in waves
like quiet embers tryin
to decide if I’m worth ignitin.every breath feels wrong,
every step lands heavy,
gravity clawin up my s…Read More![Profile Photo]()
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Sheer brilliance, Syr 253
You’ve mastered the heatbeat techniques of Free Verse poetry: Imagery, deeply gripping emotion, metaphor, spot-on line-breaks, seamless enjambment, syntax; and, except for the distraction of missing “g’s”, your diction and spellbinding flow would be irresistibly captivating to the senses.
Also, your well-placed…Read More
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Passionately penned, Willow. Excellent write my friend, this had a little R&B sass to it. Dig it. Nice arrangement with the rhythm section driving the vehicle as an accompaniment to these bars you’re slinging. It’s Fire!! Appreciate you.
Damian