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Read MoreI would kill for youI would die for youI would drag the world behind meby its throatfeel it kick and tearand finally go quietjust to lay it at your feetand ask if it’s enough I’d rip apart the ones who...
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thank you
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Terrific write even though I find love to be more whimsical and fleeting,less obsessive.
Lots of things to like about this piece.
Keep up the good work.
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we all view love little differently. appreciate it
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Well done.
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thank you
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Powerfully penned, 253. Amazing write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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thanks Damian
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Loveliest read..
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appreciate it
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Read Moreyou’re already watchinwhen the air shiftsthe way light loosensand slips from my shoulderswaitin for a soundthat doesn’t come you can’t see the violencethat rages insideonly the shiftin the way my strings are pulled and tuned a touch beneath my skulltiltin my...
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hello dearest poet this makes me think of my husband he shifts like this I never know why but he does great write ❤️
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yeah? interestin to know if other people who shift like that. thank you
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Instinct is telling something is off.But not sure what it is. Nice piece
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thanks fia
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Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write my friend. Appreciate you.
Damian
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appreciate you
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Read MoreThe Terror In The Community. The community was designed as a euphoric cornucopia of green, lush plant life, all underwater in a 25-gallon tank. Introducing into this tank were three. You heard me, three fanciful goldfish. One was an Oranda that...
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Cleverly penned, Fia. Excellent write my friend, I always enjoy your amazing storytelling. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Thank you Damian. Maurice is going to have my blood pressure up. lol
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Fantastic. Love it, Fia.
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Thank you Atticus;))
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Why not just flush Maurice?? Get rid of the non team player! maybe he can go rule the sewers or something, LOL.
I’m just being logical! Or put his ass with a male Beta (Japanese Fighting fish). No more Maurice!-
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lol I have a friend that said I should send Maurice to meet Davey Jones Locker in the toilet too. lmao. Thank you Stxian
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Chère F.,
I’d love it if this would find you mellow and at ease, just before the weekend.I’ve read your poem and I don’t understand it.
blunt Dutch analysis.
But I love the kiss by Brancusi (singer museum Leiden the Netherlands) without understanding too.
I love some of Rothko’s work too.Understanding isn’t always about what you/I can grasp at any time!
I love this write of yours and I think it’s raking me a little more time.So:
Please be patient with me!
I’ll be back, I promise! Have a very nice weekend…..
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Thank you Gus, its not a poem its a short story. I have a goldfish that is a bully. lol Have a good weekend.
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Cook Maurice and have him as an appetizer. He’d be with you forever. Great story Fia.
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Lmao no way. thank you Vision
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This starts playful but slowly tightens into something darker.
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That is so true Thomas. Thank you
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Clean slate works also. Lol
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Maurice met an untimely death. lol Thank you CasketSharpe;))
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I think you’ll need to build a little underwater jail and keep Maurice there as punishment.
This was great, yes it’s frustrating that your fishes kept dying but I love how you told this story not just as the observer but almost like a deity that you had power but they kept dying on you while you weren’t looking.
Awesome work.
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Beautifully written and heartfelt. Gives dark knight vibes