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Read Morehey dadhappy father’s day hope hell’s treatin you miserably got some good newsand some bad news good news you were harderto get rid ofthan I thought bad news well…you are harderto get rid ofthan I thought against my better judgmenti keep findin my wayback to...
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agreed
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“spent a few years
at the bottom
of a bottle
turns out
you can drown lota things
but demons fuckin float.”Penned with brutal honesty, 253. I concur with Fia. The stanza above has a lot of fucking bite, I can definitely relate to living in a bottle most of my life. Thanks for sharing your story. Appreciate you.
Damian
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appreciate it Damian
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This raw spill poem punches like a professional boxer. Each word is a bloodied and brawny fist, smashing its mark, square in the face. I absolutely concur with both, Fia, and Damian. Also, I do hope you see and realize the one and perhaps most important fact here: Your children do not fear you or cringe when you’re are near. You have effectively recreated the cycle of abuse. Thank you for sharing such a painful write.
Clay
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appreciate it. one thing did right.
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Read MoreI don't know if I believe or not whether we return for another round once our lives have ended and we've been put in the ground reduced to so much ashes or dust scattered to the winds... or sitting on a mantle what I do know... is...
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that reboot would be ideal. To just be able to start over better than how it is now
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My concern is that humanity would just fuck it up all over again. I think humanity needs the boot…up the backside. Thank you, Fia
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hello beautiful Willow this has been on my mind of late I think we do come back with another chance at building on the wisdom we gained this round… very great write ❤️
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I’m afraid there are a lot who haven’t learned yet. I begin to worry they may never get it. Thank you, Brenda 🧡
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Brilliantly penned, Willow. This is a powerful write with lots of layers my friend. I’ve always thought that if one could come back they most likely wouldn’t remember their past life, so you might be getting a second chance but without any foresight of former lived experiences. Just a theory of mine. lol. I’m probably overthinking this aren’t I? Amazing read as always. Appreciate you.
Damian
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My mind went sideways down a random path with this one, I think. I have to keep hope in place or this world will break me. It gives me hope to think that maybe the conscience becomes more pronounced on things we need to learn each time we return. I also hope (profoundly) that those resistant to the lesson come back as grubs. 😂 Thank you, my friend
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Thank you, Bat
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Willful cruelty without reason seems to be a human trait. I’ll never understand why people prey on each other. Then again, as long as I don’t understand, it isn’t likely to be a temptation to fall into that behavior. Thank you, Peter
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Thank you, Thomas
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Read Morei stood at the edgeof a cliffor a dreamor maybe it was justa place to fallmy mind builtfor itself wind pulled at my clothesmoonlight bled across broken stonewhere the ravine split the earthclean to the boneand darkness gathered between its wallsswallowin the stars I...
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Fia Naturie wrote a new post
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Read MoreA tear eluded its captivity Without a moments hesitation Enough brutality was served Still, it held its ground Until opportunity presented itself Verbal beating Lands and rips Tight skin pops Muscle bunch bracing for impact Provocation was not given Permission was not given Penance was not given Absolution was not given The...
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Terrific work Fia.
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Thank you so much Peter
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Powerfully penned, Fia. Wow, this is an excellent write with some deep layers my friend. Amazing read as always. Appreciate you, cuz.
Damian
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Deep and strangely beautiful, Fia.
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Thank you Crimsin💜
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I’m Harriet-Jacqui, lol, not Crimsin – tho’ we all wish we were Crimsin, don’t we, girls!
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Chère F.,
wow!
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Thank you Duhsjaak💜
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Oh damn…this one hits with a hammer and then gently holds the moment with that ending. A lot of depth and power in this one.
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Thank you willow. I kind of sat with this one. 💜
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Read MoreI don’t know why we painted the front porch this silver grey the wood is still flaky still brown under it’s neutral coat like those kids flapping around in their plastic cable knit sweaters feet still land bound with the...
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Some people should not be allowed to be parents. I can feel the pain in this.