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Willow posted in the group National Poetry Month
he knows the sound of my breath
as it catches
hovering over his words
like a hummingbird
imbibing
on the intoxicating nectar
of his expression4 Comments-
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Truly 😊
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Beautiful: short, simple, and beautiful. HJx
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Thank you 😊
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Willow wrote a new post
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Read Morehe knows the sound of my breath as it catches hovering over his words like a hummingbird imbibing on the intoxicating nectar of his expression
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This tells the reader what you mean but with finesse. Love it
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Thank you 😊 It was stupid o’clock in the morning so it’s short, but it says what’s important to me
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For some reason I was compelled to read this from beginning to end, and then reverse from the end to the beginning. The choice of words in this hook the reader so well. Short yes, but sweet. And done with skill and vivid imagery.
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Thank you so much 😊
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Beautifully penned, Willow. Into the book it belongs! This a magnificent little write here my friend. I mean I really dig the wordplay and imagery. Next level good. Appreciate you.
Damian
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This one had a lot to say with just a few words. I just went with what I felt. Thank you, my friend 😊
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Read Moreyou place the bladein my handand somethin in your voicemakes it feel rightsomethin given just to meb/c I earned itand I…dumb enough to believe you…hold it carefulwatchin the light settlealong the surfacebefore bringin it to my mouthslowdraggin my tongue...
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You’re rather the pain instead of the love…this shows that the comfort that can be given is a scary concept.
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Powerfully penned, 253. Excellent write with lots of layers my friend. You always deliver. Appreciate you.
Damian
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twofiftythree posted in the group National Poetry Month
the willin fool
you place the blade
in my hand
and somethin in your voice
makes it feel right
somethin given just to me
b/c I earned itand I…
dumb enough to believe you…
hold it careful
watchin the light settle
along the surface
before bringin it to my mouth
slow
draggin my tongue
along the edge
tastin what you pro…Read More -
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Fia Naturie posted in the group National Poetry Month
A little dream
Clouds rolling in softly
Delicately like a purr
Wrapped in warm cotton
Trailing thoughts of a time of tendernessInner eye awakens to a place
Where safety is given
Love is freely accepted
And a genuine smile is cherishedLet me not wake from this
Wanting to hold and be held
In a world of nonreality
Let me have…Read More - Load More Posts
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