Sam…Sam shy my ass. Well her ass. This was a two-flame burner for me. Very hot and a little funny too.

Yup… you are good at turning things on …

hello beautiful poetess this is incredibly sexy I love the build up of the meet and the anticipation of all the things he’s going to do to you… very sensual erotic and hot a very intense read to say the least 💕

yes… I still have the umbilical cord…

of course… they told me the other end belonged to my twin so I have been looking for 57 years… well, 56 … the first year I could not really walk much

Powerfully penned, Sam. Great write my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Asks many questions that I ask myself… well done

I have lost friends because of then crossing a line. A line that was stated that was there and still they proceeded to cross it. nicely done.

Thanks so much for reading and your kind words, Mary. So glad you connected with the write my friend. Appreciate you. Hope your 4th was cool. Appreciate you.

Damian

Incredible ink. I felt every word as I’ve dealt with many people like that.

Amazing write Damian.
Had my attention at every word.

Superb work.

Exactly, society today is unhinged. You have such a strong and fierce ability to pull the reader in Damian.
Loved this 👍🏻
Keep writing ✍️ thanks for sharing
Love Jackie 🤟

I not only can’t fathom how they can justify their greed & cruelty to themselves, I don’t want to. To sink to their level of thinking seems incredibly slimy to me. You never disappoint in bringing the Real, my friend

hello dearest poet this is a very difficult write my mind plays tricks on me when things are too painful so in a way I understand hugs 💕

Powerfully penned, Drieks. This pulled at my heartstrings my friend. Appreciate you.

Damian

Our minds never remember exactly how things were, it fills gaps with perceptions etc.
The mind lies and you haven’t forgotten the face.
Great write.🙏

Very gripping write…

Intense read.
You got the mind and the heart working.
Regards
James

Powerful work. Tremendous

Brilliant storytelling, Meg. Appreciate you.

Damian

Once again, Megan🎖

Mystery, excitement, hardcore, tender … whatever/whenever perfection in a scenario demands, your pen seems to instinctively command visual diction with the stroke of a master artist’s brush.

You continually assure us of your raconteuric skills on any level in every theme, breathing life into the utmost sensual or deeply erotic scene, to characters’ personalities that take on verisimilitude as though we could reach out and touch them, smell their breath, feel their heat, actually hear the emotional timbre in their voices, and see the colors of their eyes, as their pupils dilate and flex.

Simply, enviously brilliant, Lady-Author … you’re provenly the best!
How very fortunate we are you share! ⁓ Richard🖌

Richard, it’s so wonderful to have you following along with me. Your comments blow my mind. You make me so happy! Sorry for the delay in the next chapter. Hopefully this week.

xoxoxo